Delightful story, very funny, though touching at times-I could really empathize with Edmund's longing to join his siblings and his frustration when it was impossible. Thank you so much for your story.

I think I would pay good money to see a hound in a corset.

wonderful chapter, I love a sarcastic and cheeky Edmund-thigh circumference-so funny. Love the idea of his Murder of Crows and Mischief of Rats as his CIA (or MI-5 I guess is more appropriate) - genius. And so handy that he can pay them in muffins and shiny bits.

Breasts of Doom-I laughed for 10 minutes. Thanks, I needed that.

Well, I finally made it through.

I've matured a bit since I last tried to read this, and it was a bit easier to ignore things that made me slightly uncomfortable. It really was an interesting story. Morgan and Edmund seem to fit eachother rather well. And I always love to see the guards. I've taken a particular liking to Jalur in this one :)

Pure brilliance, this. I really am beginning to think you know Narnia - and the incredible worldbuilding you have added to it - better than any other author around. This was splendiforous in the way that only a fiction that takes into account all the intricacies of Narnian politics and inhabitants can be. Hilarious, delightful and so elegantly crafted that I'm feeling quite suddenly shy to be commenting on a story that tops many ink-based published works of literature I've read. I'm sorry I can't elaborate more on the specifics of why I enjoyed it so much, I'm a bit overwhelmed with where exactly to begin because it was *all so good*.

I will keep it to one point - I have never been so enchanted and utterly disarmed by an OC. Perfection - utter perfection. The remedy to every Mary Sue I've ever had the misfortune to meet. Your Just Edmund made me squee like a fangirl. I'm blubbering right now so I shall stop. Lovely lovely work. Many thanks for sharing this marvelous gift with us.

I don't think I have laughed more in a long time! Edmund's allergies are quite hilarious and Evil Banker Morgan is very novel and witty. I'm pretty enamoured with the idea of crow betting schemes, Shinies are very humourous!

Wow... I never new Edmund had such a twisted voice in his head/ persistent alter-ego... although he deals with it far better than some would.

It actually ended up being rather amusing ( .). The way the crows and Morgan put things is also rahter to my liking. I am also naturally rather sarcastic and blunt. I also agree with Edmund about corsets. It's all rather ridiculous. And unneccessary.

Great fic!

Caity :)

Oh. My. Gosh. I didn't believe your story about the otters escaping so I googled it and sure enough, there it was! That's ridiculous. Anyway, I am enjoying this story so far. I love Jalur and his personality. I also love the Narnian Intelligence Agency. Edmund has quite a bit of power it seems. Thank you for writing such a delightful story. It is hard to smother my laughter (I have to or people give me strange looks).

I read By Royal Decree a while ago, and I'm sure I have you on Author Alert, but I wasn't sure if I reviewed. I really did like it; it may be an OC for Edmund, but it's very well written, and I decided to give it a chance when I first read it. The humor was both obvious at some parts and subtle at others, and it made for good reading. So yes, though I don't usually like OCs for either of the brothers, I make exceptions (rarely, because most are *indelicately* executed, but I do). :) From what I've read of this fic, it's certainly good enough for me to let go my grudge against OCs and embrace Morgan with open arms.

Thanks for the PM thanking me for adding this to my favorites. It's probably what you do for everyone, but I got horribly excited over it (possibly because I regard you with a certain bit of awe not unlike how Caspian felt about Peter).

"his molested left arm" might be one of my favorite phrases in all fanfiction.

Thanks for the laughs!

I... I do not even have WORDS for how much this story delighted me! Allergies! Taxes! The manner of speech they use! THE FREAKING OTTERS! It's six a.m. and instead of sleeping for the past few hours I have been reading this story and quietly giggling to myself so as not to disturb my husband. I lay a palm branch at your feet and shout 'huzzah!' for you have captured Narnia in this tale, and it is well. Thank you!

That is soo edmund to pour juice - really funny. Then try to make it all better by offering tea. I burst out laughing

"Formidable intellects to be sure, but really, was it any wonder they blundered about so, sometimes? Should they not try a little harder to perceive with their hearts?" Truly, we all should try a little harder. That may be another reason why I always liked Lucy so much - she perceives with her heart more than any of the other three. This has truly been a delightful romp, and I'm so glad to know the background of "Harold and Morgan" now. Thank you for such a fun read! HL.

Until I read your post-chapter note, I thought this was the ending! Trust Edmund to want to keep haggling and haggling, though, until all works out as he wishes. :) I want to attend a Very Narnian Occasion. Perhaps I can create something like it in celebration of Beltane. :) I thought the conversation between Edmund and Princess Peony (and Jalur, of course) oddly touching. Peony obviously senses something different and special about Narnia, though she doesn't understand it and can't quite put it into words. She may prove a very effective emissary for Narnia after all. HL.