tai's_ dead?

First off, this fic should have recieve WAY more reviews than it did. Must be because people have no stomach for blood these days... Ah well. I thought it was fantastic. I was glued from the start and nearly threw my computer against the wall in sheer frustrations. (believe it or not, I do that a lot...)

This fic was a brick of emotion that slams right into your face, or your gut depending on what hurts more. I almost stopped reading it at first because the thought of Tai being evil kinda threw me off... I guessed that it was him from the start and well, it interuppted my picture of innocence for him. I suppose it would've happened eventually because I'm quite the bloodthristy creature, in writing anyway.

Honestly though, this story should've been in the M category because of the gore but I'm glad it wasn't as I don't stray into the M fanfictions often. I kinda want more. A lot more. PLEASE WRITE MORE! I need a sequel, or at least an epilouge. Pleaseeeeeee...

But thank you for sharing this beautiful story. I hope to see more from you in the near future. :D (wow... my longest review ever...)

May your heart stay strong,

DarkAngel555

i love this story so much! your work is really amazing. it touched the heart and soul of its readers.

Ya know what?

I have been listening to the Adagio de Albinoni from Sarah Brightman during reading and I have been crying in the end!

I should say that it's a great story, I haven't read such great work a very long time!And you know what?

I thank you for this opportunity...

It is worth to live for such things in life and I'm truly graetful!Once more: you are great!

Wow...that was seriously deep. I'm very impressed with u're writing skills _. Poor Tai...wha... Very great story, sad, but great

aw... poor Tai. *wails*

This fic was so sad! Poor Tai, enduring all of that and then dying... Poor Sora for having the one she loved ripped away. This fic was great though, it had my attention all day long! This fic was great and remember: Taiora foreva!

Wow... I hate you for doing this to Tai.:p That being said you sould write a squle plesse

WOW! After I finsihed your x-ev story I decided to ry some of your others! This was amazing. You did a fantastic job pulling together many different threads. Loved the Tkari. I also love all of the quotes that you do, because they are so prevelant to the chapter. Amazing Work!

Very well written. I was touched by many of the parts. In my opinion, I think you should of made the ending of season 2. -

You shouldn't bash yourself! You're a great writer. Even if you claimed to be new at this kind of thing. Perhaps writing is what you excel in. It's great how there were minor errors in your story, and had lots of details. Very good indeed.

If anyone plans to write a sequel, I hope the continuation is in good hands. Did anyone start, or even plan to write a sequel yet? (I wish to be informed!) Or maybe YOU should write the sequel! If not, at least an epilogue. I am sure you'll come up with an epilogue someday with your capabilities. I also want to see the fanart that people have drawn. Maybe you should make a website for this fic, including all these features..

Thinking now, I *still* have this small discontentment towards the ending of this fic that I can't seem to get over. (If anyone hasn't read the fic yet and only the reviews, I don't want to ruin anything. I will say, however, that it deals with Tai's state.) And another thing that made me unsatisfied was the Yolei Izzy thing. (Even if minor.) I'm more of a Yolei Ken fan. All in all though, it was good. If I ever decide to be a member here, I'll put this as one of my favorite stories.

This truly has been one of the best fanfics online that I've ever read. You seem to have a way with words. Good job. Keep up the excellent work.

Wow, that was fantastic! I particularly enjoyed your cliffhangers and the elements of suspense and angst that you used in almost every chapter. It made everything seem so dark, but in a good way, of course. I also really liked your ending, which was extremely well-written and pleasant, semi-sweet finish to this great series. Keep up the good work!

Wow...this was utterly amazing. Bravo! I'd loved it, u really worked hard on this. it shows!

Bravo! you had excellent descriptions, awsome grammar, and a edge on ur seat story line. you did good. two thumbs up

oops, almost forgot... I got an abso-positively-lutely lovely email from someone called Daemon-Fingers who drew me a lovely picture based on "The Darkness Within". If anybody else would like to do this then pleeeeeeeeease do! I'd never really thought about artwork sprung from my writing before, but this piece was so nice that I'm willing to get down on my knees and BEG 4 more. (Just be warned about that, OK.)If anybody fancies having a bash then you know where to send it - but just in case you forgot, my address is

Thanx 2 all!I'm really glad U liked this fic. Officially, owari means 'The End', but I thought it was a bit cheesy to write is as such, so now U know. I'm not going to write an epilogue, as I feel that it would spoil it (in other words, I can't think of anything that would serve as a good enough epilogue, and am reluctant to compromise the rest of the fic with a bad one.) However, if anybody else wants to have a go then be my guest (same goes for anyone interested in concocting a sequel) just do me a favour please - either send it to me in an email first, or at least let me know who you are thru a review so that I can read it on , ta muchly!

In an effort to clear up a few things - the earlier scene between the coroner and police officer was basically just a plot device (although people can do more with them if they want to, I have no qualms on this front) the whole idea behind finding the crest of courage on them was that the tainted crest's energy had been used by the entity and was consequently leaving its own mark on the victims. Tai invoked the power of his crest to set this right by walking away from his true happiness into a battle he knew he wasn't going to walk away from. I know I probably just robbed the fic of some of its effect, but I felt these things needed to be addressed. If anybody has any other queries about stuff they didn't understand then either send me an email, or write a review with them in and I'll create a sheet of FAQs to tack on the end.

Thank U 4 listening (or reading, whichever takes you're fancy) and I'll see U soon.

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