the best write more still having a lauging fit

i love it

roflmao

LOL!

that was funny! i can so see that happening!

now im laughing at the mental picture! it's hilarious!


that was so cleaver and really good!


Love NCISchick xoxoxo
Happy Easter!

Oh my dear! I laughed so hard I thought I was McGee from your last sentence. So are you going to continue because this is funny stuff!

This is a fantastic idea for a story - it is such a shame that you didn't develop it more - especially as other people might feel awkward about 'copying' your idea now.

That's it? This is complete? No explanation of why she's there? No Tony at least trying to set them straight? I can see the humor in the scenario but, even for a one-shot, this feels incomplete.