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zchocolatebunniesrulezworld
2009-10-24 . chapter 1
A CHOCOLATE BUNNY! XDD Aren't completely random coincidences fun? I'm rather pleased with my choice of penname now...;)
This is so adorable, and one of the few MelloxMatt fics with a happy ending (that I've read recently--*oodles* of dripping fluff out there :D but I've been seeing so much tragedy lately that this is a lurvely relief)
Of course Mello would eat the whole thing in two weeks. Goodness, man, control yourself! You won't get laid if you weigh the three hundred pounds you rightfully SHOULD XP...naw, Matty'll love you anyway, the sweetie-pie.
I love Matty-in-the-morning! He's such a grumbly little munchkin, and Mello waking him up was, for lack of a better word, KAWAII.
So, yuppers, I adore everything about this chocolate-wrapped
pancake-making bundle of sweetness with some movie-watching thrown into the mix.
(How could I NOT?--I'm basically Mello's Easter present! LOL...I wish...)
Thank you for your review reply, by the way. To think my blabbles actually *mean* something?--makes a zchocolatebunnies happy ^^ (and did I mention how much I love your reviews?)
lozzy035
2009-05-30 . chapter 1
aww this was sweet
Nicha The Purple Ghost
2009-04-27 . chapter 1
Aww so cute, I love Mello being a girl for Matt XD
YagamiNeko
2009-04-14 . chapter 1
Aww. This was REALLY cute!!Typical Mello to wake Matt at 5 in the morning! Happy Easter everyone!
theyletmeinthemafia
2009-04-14 . chapter 1
Aw, that was really cute. I almost squealed out loud at the part of Mello's hair in a pony tail. He'd look so cute. xD And geeze, who spends that much money on chocolate, Matty? @_@;

I loved it!

-Necury
Slaone
2009-04-13 . chapter 1
aww
Crimson Cupcake
2009-04-13 . chapter 1
Matt was not pleased. Of course he wasn't XD It took me 3-4 days to finish a HOLLOW chocolate bunny >.> Mello is really scary sometimes...XD Another amazing story! I look forward to your updates ^^
Artificial Starlight
2009-04-13 . chapter 1
Ha ha. The rabbit was eaten in two weeks... Mello goes through chocolate so fast.

This was cute and enjoyable. Thanks for the great read. You rock! :)
Sweetheart5793
2009-04-12 . chapter 1
Wow, that is so wrong! It only took Mello 2 weeks to eat the bunny! Geez! It takes me 2 months to eat the 1 lb bunnys! Anyway, really cute story!
creature of the light
2009-04-12 . chapter 1
very, insanely cute. i also love the idea of melo with a ponytail, cooking breakfast. how cute. and the beginning scene in the bed? can you say aww?! loved it.
Interstella
2009-04-11 . chapter 1
XD I love it.
Do they really make chocolat bunnies like that?
-wants-
I Spaz With Pizzazz
2009-04-11 . chapter 1
awh, he's like a little kid on christmas but worse. XD this is a very adorable fic. but poor matt, his bunny got all eaten up so fast. ^^; well, it is mello though. he couldn't /really/ have expected it to last very long...
~Pizzazz
doing 25 life in azkaban
2009-04-11 . chapter 1
I agree that Mello in a ponytail is adorable (have you seen fan art where he has a ponytail, it's so cute!).
That was a very nice one-shot and makes me feel better about having to get up at five o'clock tomorrow morning too and like Matty I'll be getting a homecooked meal for my efforts xD
slain angel
2009-04-11 . chapter 1
major fluff! loved it totally adorable, i love mello with a pony tail too! lol
threemillionworded
2009-04-11 . chapter 1
Aw! the fluffiness is adorable!

It's a wonderful one-shot I must say.
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