I liked it:)

What an appropriate ending for the episode. I loved it.

Nice. I still think these stories could have been longer.

Good ol Teal'c. What a guy.

nice chap.

A very appropriate ending. All of it, the whole chapter. By the way... Since this Canadian production took place in the United States of America... Thank you, thank you, and thank you again for spelling "Fruit Loops" in the, dare I say, correct spelling for the US... I have difficulty with it spelled "Froot Loops," though I respect authors from other countries that spell it that way... --EarthBug

This was perfect as the day after all the loops. So consistent with both of them, and the feeling of the episode. Awesome! Thank you,

Sam.

This one feels so right to go with the episode as well as the other two and I love the idea of Teal'c suggesting they go fishing at the end. Thanks for taking the time and sharing.

Good story, though I was wondering if anything that was said or done by Jack or Teal'c was going to come back to haunt them. Just my wondering.