really good - please update

Hi there, I don't know if you'll get this review or not but I did want to say that I truly have enjoyed this story. I started reading it just recently and I'm in love with it. I love everything about it. The slow build up makes the story. Like you mentioned in a previous chapter, we didn't get to see the progression of their relationship on the show, so to read what it may have have kind of been like is a really original idea...at least in terms of how you went about doing it.

I have thoroughly enjoyed this thus far and I know you haven't updated in a little over a month and I don't know when or if you plan to update again but I felt like I owed you a review. Maybe your muse is just not kicking in or life has gotten in the way but I do hope you update this again sometime.

They've made it this far on their journey, I'd hate to see them not get their true happily ever after.

I love this story! And I'm going crazy waiting for an update! So please please please update soon! :D

You know...I really, really wish that the show had set the same pace with these two that you do in your stories. I never feel like you're rushing them or dragging it out. And I love you take certain events in the show and twist them to make it your own. Beyond cool =) Also, I *adore* your Mark! His reactions to everything are so perfect and, I dunno, but whenever I read one of your stories, there's this sort of quiet grace about him that's such a good fit for him. Awesomeness, really. Just wanted to let you know that all I want to do is hug the crap out of this story =D I'll be waiting eagerly for future chapters!

Excellent! Love Your Story!

I love the line he does not want to be her friend.

Can't wait for more!

Very good, I hope you update soon again. One thing though, you might consider changing the rating of this story to perhaps a T, just to be on the safe side :)

BEAUTIFUL!
oh god
u have to update soon
please!

Yay!! They are finally together!! Can't wait to see how things work out for them! Update again soon!

Finally!

Ok you have definitely made my day...no my week lol :-) now you just need to update asap.

Oh wow! That was so well written. I can't wait for more of this story.

Okay that was so amazing, how much passion they had for each other than how tender and loving he was as he undressed her and held her to him. I love how she realized that there was nothing wrong with her that it was George who had something wrong with him...can't wait for the next chapter. :)

phew!


let ME cool some steam and I'll come back to give you a proper (sp?) review.


flames!

Yes...Pure Hotness in this chapter!! Mark & Lexie finally did the do and it was HOT!! I just loved how you put it all together. I can't wait to see what happens next...the morning after should be interesting plus Mark & Lexie explaing to everyone where they disappeared too. Great Job!! Don't take so long to update.

Wow, that was pretty hot! The way that Mark was acting with Lexie was so intimate. I just loved the end of the chapter where Lexie realized George leaving her didn't mean that something was wrong with her because Mark found her desirable. George's lost was DEFINITELY her gain. ;)