you make me cry you know good story

-Sniff- it was all good until you wrote the the couple of chapters!now im crying...its so sad-sniff-

WHY? I thought it would be a happy ending-sniff-

Did you have to make the story so sad. I cried at the end. Why didn't they just use the dragonballs to wish Goten and Bra back?

that was one of the most touching stories i have ever read!

you made me cry! and that is very rare for me! how could they both die? Why? how could you be so cruel? they weren't suppose to die i agree with bob! poor kids! you made me all sentimental and shit! curses! i have 2 admit (reluctanly) it was a touching story!*sobbing* (

DEEP! LOVE IT!

OHHH! I have to admit, the way that you write Vegeeta is PERFECT! It sounds like him! I mean it SOUNDS JUST LIKE HIM! MORE! GIVE US MORE!

OHHH! You truly are EVIL! But you write a great DBZ story! I look forward to reading the rest of it.

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They weren't supposed to die!

They were supposed to live and raise their children!

Holy crap! That was so sad! V.V Very well written! -bows- You are a great author, wonderful job! Most stories don't make me cry and when they do, they ar truely awesome ones. Congrads on a FANTASTIC story!

How cute! I absolutely love B/G stories! You had me crying during the chapter that Bra died! Keep on writing more like this one! Love ya!

hehe, i finally got off my lazy bum to write you a review. I loved this story and am sad to see it end. what a sad ending! i swear i almost cried as Gohan told the two about their real parents. *sniff*

Awww! This was beautiful and sad too! I nearly cried!

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! that was soooooooooooooooo SWEET! I have tears in my eyes. awwwwwwwwww!

NO! Bra's going to WHAT? She can't! ..grr, I won't be able to read anymore for like 2 weeks cos i'm going on holiday tomorrow! ;_; Oh well, Cya!