Such a cute story, I loved it!

whOa!

fIRST OF ALL...EWW mIZ!! hOW HELLa CREEPY...** AND ViNYL?

Second of all...Miz sounds STRANGEELY like someone I know...who isn't the Miz...hm...fishY!

Third...*sighs*...I love one-shots! This was so great. Just simple and sweet, yet full of dirty passion and longing and forbidden desires of the loins. :P You know, mine was gonna be all complicated and dirty...you just write it and I love that! It was so sweet. I felt so so sorry for Caramel Carly in the very beginning, but I'm so glad it ended the way it did. Of course, I didn't see it ending any other way, but you know..lol! Miz seriously creeped me out. OMG!! The tickle me Elmo line?!1 HOLY **! I literaly ** my pants!! It didn't feel good, but THAT'S how brilliant that line was!! Hahahahaha!! In you face, Mizzy!

I love Melony & Carlito together for some reason. They're one of those coples I can just see together without hesitation. *giggles* I loved this so much!! You did a really great job on this one, for sure. I can't wait for the next writing masterpiece you pull outta your genius butt!