Again, stellar work. There's a great sense of family and closeness that prevails in all of the Redemption Squad, and it's so real and credible in your writing despite the fact in canon us fans have yet to see it happen. I'd love it done the line to see it all this way, definitely.

Plus, you're rocking all the great synced up details--stuff you don't have to overtly mention for us garg fans to get it, and it's just really nice. Like Jason mentioning his insider in the NYPD without actually naming Elisa. Also, kudos for the Robyn/Xanatos interaction. Top notch.

And BRAVO to your wonderful use of ask Greg and Gargwiki. It's amazing just how many authors fail to use this extremely bountiful resource. I had to look up your reference to the mystery Pack member, but I am so glad you made it.

Just one little nitpicky thing: about halfway down there's a phrase that says "Dingo was never one for sitting idol" when I think you meant "idle."

Oh wow, I didn't see that one. Though I guess I should have considering what they've been up to :)

Will be interesting to see how this affects her and Harry and her activities on the team.

You sould really try and maybe do at least three odd friendship stories around Fang and Yama, even if that could happen with the way those two are?

Unlike Dingo and Robyn's love/hate style relationship, I think it would be kind of funny to see Fang and Yama's hate/hate relationship slowly start's turning into a real good friendship between those two.

Please update again soon & thank you!

Excellent chapter! You're doing very well of keeping your fics in tune to Weisman's Garg-verse.