"Listen to me, you little smart aleck, I'm an adult, you're a child; I'm big, you're little; I'm experienced, you're a tenderfoot; I'm smart, you're dumb; I'm right, you're wrong! Get used to it!"

Reminds me of that movie based on Roald Dahl's Matilda.

Wow! I have never submited a review until now, even though I have read all 4 previous books. I think you are a great writer and I am totally loving this story! Keep it up! I can't wait for more!:)

Ack! A cliffhanger! I'm dying to find out what happens next. This is getting suspensful.

Mystic

Let me guess... Based on Cavin and Calla's response, they want to make Marie a god-parent of their child in case something happens to them? :)

This is another awesome chapter, Ulisa! You rock!

Cassandra sounds adorable - sounds like my niece that was born this past week.

I can't wait until Buddi is big enough to get even w/Ryo *g* He has it coming. Can't wait to read more!

Mystic

great so far hope to see the rest of the chapters up soon

Ursa needs some pms pills, sheesh *g* Where did the name Cassandra come from? It totally fits but I was wondering if I forgot something important.

Mystic

A few comments:

I feel that of all the stories listed here, yours is definitely of a better caliber, and I see you doing great things here that I hoped someone would write, besides myself. Thanks, Ulisa, and for letting me critique and answer your questions!:)

cheets

Want more, Ulisa! *stomps around like a cub in fits* Want Mooorrree!

cheets

Oh, that is just great!:)

*goes to read #2*

This trap door mystery is getting real interesting now. I can't wait to read more.

Mystic

"My Bonni lies over the ocean, my bonni lies over the sea" *g* Apparently not anymore. I like the idea of bringing in more gummies

Mystic

good beginning hope to see the rest posted soon

i like the couplings of the characters hope to see many more series like this one in the future

I like Bonni instantly:) Awesome! And all those cubs! Hee hee! Can you imagine gummi cubs and human cubs.. I mean, kids, playing together! Oh, boy!

cheetathefurry