Absolutely beautiful! The only story for this show and it was executed wonderfully. Good Job. Don't give up - you obviously have talent! DON'T GIVE UP! :]

See, I'm afraid you won't get this, because most of the time unfinished stories by authors who only have that story are forgotten and covered in dust, along with the site, and the email they signed up for the site with ]. But sir or ma'am, this is absolutely wonderfully done. The way you use imagery to create the first chapter is like... it's purely amazing. I am hooked on this story and I beg of you to finish it. Pleasee ]

I hope you get this,

Nayah

Sounds good so far...can't wait for more!

I love the metaphors in both of these chapters, and the melancholy, pessimistic aura that's straight from the show. Really well written, great short stories.

finally, u know how long i've been waiting 4 someone 2 write a The Beast story?:) i'm still working on mine. this seems very interesting. more please:)