I am enjoying this story. You write well :) I want to see what happens when Eden meets D. Please update!

I like where you have taken the story. I can't wait to read more.

It's well written, and the concept is pretty original :3

The only issue I have is that I don't see how Eden could be a dhampire since Charlotte was bitten before she and Meier left on the ship. There wasn't even a hint about her being pregnant, but other than that I like the story so far and I hope you continue.

Again, a wonderful chapter you have written. I can't wait for the next chapter to be posted and am excited for when she meets D because they're so opposite of one another. Keep up the good writing ;)

ah I like it =] update soon

would Xhex's name happen to come from a particular vampiress bar bouncer or is that just coincidence?

I really liked this chapter, though a part of that is seeing another update in the too-small VHD category by a talented writer. I really like how you are going into the background of the OC rather than just throwing her in there. I want to say that i really want you to update but that would be repeating myself wouldn't it? *sigh* that doesn't make it any less true.

And I did keep my promise didn't I?

Nice Start! Finally a Story that caught my attention. I hope there will be a lot more chapters. Please Update ASAP.

Ohh, sounds like a very interesting story you have here. Maybe you could add the next chapter so I could see what is to happen. Keep up the good writing ;)

thank you thank you for this! finally a Dx dhampir-OC story free of Mary Sue-ness! Keep 'em coming, and I'll promise to review every chapter.