that...was...AWESOME! I loved it so much that I'm going to put it in my favorites, and tell all of my friends to read it, and everyone I know, for that matter. I might even go down the street and tell people I don't even know to read it. Hell, I might even make a whole website dedicated to telling people they HAVE to read this. IT ROCKS!

Aw, Demyx and Matt are such a great couple *-*
And wow, what a amazing story! It's awesome, really!

OH GOD, POOR DEMYX D:
Tell me he is not dead ;_;
"exposed" is not dead... is it? ;O;'
Oh my, I can't wait for more 8D'
Update~

OH NO!
Luxord lies!! Demyx isn't dead! He didn't even SAY he was dead! He said he was "disposed" of! Which isn't DEAD.
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I like how you use the lyrics from Sanctuary for the titles of your chapters. :3
:D
Can't wait until your next update!!

~cLoud
_:*DearlyBeloved-13*:_

No~ Demyx! *emo sobs*

This chapter had a whole lot going on that really surprised me with how fast this story is progressing. Not to say that's a bad thing, in fact, I rather like it. Stories that drag on for forever, while not necessarily bad, tend to have the option of being either amazingly good or way too boring. I do have the felling that however long this goes on, It will probably be the first.

I am mad, though not at you. I'm very mad at Xaldin and Xemnas, because both of them are total douche-bags. Why would they do that to poor Demyx? Gr.

Next is insanely epic, and it did make me very sad when he said that it "hurt too much", but I can't help but think that it's a bit of foreshadowing (dear lord, I spelled that word wrong almost four times. And it's not even a difficult word)...

Perhaps I'm wrong, but it seems like it's a hint of things to come (I'm not typing that word again. sorry.)

Anyways, as per usual, great job and update soon, please.

-Kitsune Alchemist

Matt with the Organization? Oh noes.

Not only does that genuinely surprise me, but I can't see Matt as evil. Ever.

At least he has a good reason? I don't know. But I do understand that he would leave Mello for Demyx...

Oh, gosh, what it Mello going to do? If he's going this far for "a boy who doesn't even know his last name", I can't imagine what he'd do for his best friend...

Huh... I can't wait to see.

Typically my reply would be more intelligent, but I'm in panic mode for my paper that's due tomorrow. As it is, I'll definitely be waiting for the next (lawl) chapter.

- Kitsune Alchemist

Wow... Near is a Nobody. Would not have called that last chapter, though I must admit that when Axel said the new Nobody's name, I was like "Well, **... Near’s a Nobody now…” It’s somehow very fitting though, seeing as he was very bland and seemingly emotionless in the series anyways. And a bit in this story, though we never saw enough of the regular Near to know…

I rather dislike that Matt is helpless, but I believe I’ll get used to it. Or, maybe he’ll get something later. I don’t know. I suppose it’s just necessary to wait and se how events unfold.

I do like that Axel refuses to kill Demyx. It’s very much in his character to kill, but not those he “cares” about. After all, he refused to hurt Roxas when ordered, instead attempting to bring him back until the very last. I appreciate that he and Demyx are at least close enough to be “chummy”, though perhaps that’s my “AkuDemmy fangirl” side speaking out?

It makes me kind of sad that Xigbar is the one who was sent after them. I imagined someone else as the one sent to recapture them, though the bet made sense and somehow redeemed him in my eyes… I know, I’m odd.

Aside from that, I need to stop leaving these horribly long reviews. I think I’m getting in the habit because of a particular reviewer of one of my own Death Note stories…

Anyways, please update as soon as possible as this story is amazingly lovely beyond all sense of reason.

- Kitsune Alchemist

Ha! I knew it!
Next is Near's nobody!
As soon as I read this part-

“We got a thirteenth member, while you were gone,” was the explanation he received. “A boy about your age- twenty or so. Controls puppets. A kook just like the rest of them.”

“What’s his name?”

“Next.”

-I totally spazzed and was like "OMG?! NEAR TURNED INTO A NOBODY!?!?"
Although I should've been expecting it, I wasn't so it would be a huge understatement to say that I was shocked. XD

Anyway, barely two chapter and I am totally falling in love with this story! KH and Death Note totally mix in a strange way! XD

I wonder if Matt will get any sort of special ability in the chapters to come...?
Haha, well I look forward to the next update! 8D

-cLoud

Confusing, but very interesting. Not to mention that I love that Demyx is the one that gets to help them out... probably because he's the only one that would get captured? Ah well, aside from that, I like it, and I'm really interested to see what happens with this story.

I really wonder what would have happened had Mello been the keyblade master, and I suppose new we really do get to see... Though if Near is in the place of Riku, is he going to turn up evil like Riku? Near as the bad guy would be highly entertaining to say the least...

Then again, as you have had a few differences (Nobody's showing up, an actual explanation as to how they got to Traverse Town, etc.) I suppose things aren't going to be the same... especially when you consider that Mello would probably end up laughing at people rather than helping them like Sora.

Now, after this too-long review, I'll just be quiet after saying that I can't wait until this story gets updated so I get to see what happened. I hope that you update as soon as possible.

-Kitsune Alchemist

Wow, this is... really weird. But I like it! It's very interesting! And I think I know why they captured Near, but I won't say anything. ^-^ So, anyway... I have nothing to say. I am very speechless. It's very funny. And interesting. But I think I've said that before, so I think I'll shyut up now.

OMG Yay!!
A KH and Death Note cross over!! Totally cool!! 8D
And, whoa, first chapter and already so much is going on. XD
Anyway, I'm looking forward to chapter two! I'm liking this a lot already! 8D

-cLoud