This is a great story. I don't care if its misspelled.

The video of it on youtube is just as good.

Keep it up :)

c'mon now. anyone who has anything bad to say about this is either jealous, or just jealous. I could read these stories and watch the awesome videos derived from this awesomocity all day long. thanks for the smiles on face.

ignore all these naysayers because for your work to be turned into a video adaptation- that's excellent. keep writing more of your excellent epics dammit

This is the greatest story of all time. The symbolism seen in each of your stories is obvious, yet so many people miss it. We have John Freeman, an everyday man thrust into an epic war. There's Gordon Freeman, a hero who has fallen from grace, yet dies redeemed. Henry Freeman, who is beginning to learn that he must live life without his great father someday. The fact that nobody notices this makes me sad.

Keep writing, my good man. Keep writing.

These stories/videos are awesome. I just watch them over and over. This last chapter is truly epic. I rate it millon stars.

Please continue the stories of the Freeman family and I will still be happy soul.

You should do another one of these, to see how far you can go at failing while still being awesome. You picked the right fandom to troll in - it gives the GModders and YouTubians something to do :P
And you're a far superior writer to the likes of Stephenie Meyer - we enjoy this because it's so funnily bad, not because we're deluded enough to think it's good :P

this is horrible you are bad at spelling

awsm

Me and Gorden Freeman loved the fanfic and others. I am great saver of humens and Gorden Freeman loved me for this. I am glad Henry Freeman has become President and humens and animals and earth has peace. Combines are evil and killed many humens but I saved everyone from Combines. If I have words to say, it is to save Henry Freeman and humens and me and Gorden Freeman and motorcycle from evil fanfics.

NO! Teh end r maek meh sadz! I no liek sadz endign! I r will miss this story. TT_TT

I can almost imagine the dead pants going to heaven with the Freemans.

Excellent work, my friend. Excellent work.

A true epic, worthy of song. Seriously though, what could I say that hasn't already been said. Thanks for the lulz I guess.

There's intentionally poor writing for parodic purposes, and then there's whatever I just read. Clearly famous for horrible spelling/grammar/punctuation/storytelling, this is one of the most displeasing things ever to be on a computer screen.

If you're trying for laughs, tone it down because you're just drawing people in who find what reads like a second-grade essay to be the funniest thing in the entire world. Everyone has the potential to be a good writer, but most don't harness it.

However, if this is your true, 100% effort writing, you should take classes to improve, or consider having some beta your work prior to uploading it.

So you're the infamous troll known as squirrelking. I wonder why I never thought to look at your work before now, but it doesn't matter.

Unfortunately for you, you are not the first troll I've encountered (** Barney Bunch) nor are you the funniest (that honor belongs to the highly famed Tara Gilesbie, author of My Immortal). However, this is definitely better than most other trolls out there. I mean in terms of reviews, of course.

But what the hell is up with this? Nine oneshots, all of them simply ridden with grammatical errors, spelling errors, and a very tenuous story.

The phrase "save the humens" makes me lose faith in humans. Ironic, tragic, and something that never should have been.

Coincidentally, those are the same words most people with a brain would use to describe you.

End of flame/rant.

Truely, the greatest examples of modern internet literature. A masterpiece that will bring hope and joy to the people around the world.

To all the critics: I don't see YOUR fanfiction being made into a movie on Gmod.