Oh wow this sounds intense, can't wait to see what happens next ;)

plz keep wrting its really good

ok. :3

that was really good plz keep wrting i loved it good job on wrting it

i so cant wait for the next chapter. so proud of you >.

This is incredibly interesting so far! Cant wait for the next chapter!

loved it. :3

yes i like this story all that mystery is great oh and just dont reveal to much of their past with the guy so as to keep us coiming back lolol but this is one of my favs and i cant wait for the next chapter

I think you started off your story really well because of all thy emystery which i love by the wayloolo i think you should began to tell the readers what is Brians and Doms relationship with serenity and about the men but you should have them in the story explaining it to the group because you have them wondering why Brian is back then after you tell about her and the man who has her go back to serenity's point of view lolol cant wait for more

loved it. :3 Continue plz.

loved it. :3

this...was amazing...well done