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Shadow of Intent
2009-11-13 . chapter 1
oh thats nasty
VisserZer0
2009-10-29 . chapter 3
I, on the other hand, am bad about using the word 'said' too often. Shoot me, but first, you'll have to buy somthin', strangah. I'd say 'update', but it's kind of been updated several times since now.

VisserZer0 out
VisserZer0
2009-10-29 . chapter 2
"Eh..." The special agent said. "You look..."
"Hot?" The merchant couldn't resist asking.
"Eh... Come Ashley, let's go."
Awesome. Despite what you said about no humor, parts of tis have actually been very amusing. Can't wait to read the rest. I like this!

VisserZer0 out...strangah
The Aviatian Master
2009-08-19 . chapter 9
2 questions, 1: Was the guy a goverment agent or was he indepentant, and I forgot the other one. *
10/10
The Aviatian Master
2009-08-19 . chapter 1
I'm sorry for pointing out something so trivial, but WHY THE (F)UCK DOES HE HAVE A (F)UCKING PUNISHER?! The Punisher is the worst gun in the (f)ucking game! Other then that, good job. #
4/5 (It's been uneventful so far)
Natureboy3
2009-08-18 . chapter 9
Wonderful story! Love how you did the Merchant! You have created a new favorite pairing for me! Nice job!
Electric Eclectic
2009-08-07 . chapter 9
(Claps) That was awesome! I can't wait for the next fic strangah!
Lia
2009-08-07 . chapter 9
Aw...no merchantxashley anymore? :/ but great story! :D it's pretty sad, but hooray! They finally going back home!
slouchingtyger
2009-08-07 . chapter 9
That was a bittersweet ending. But happy for me, since I prefer Leon x Ashley anyway. Haha. But this was very sweet, it was nice that the Merchant was able to be what she needed, and even sad that she had to say goodbye. It was nice that Leon and the Merchant said goodbye to each other as well. I guess there's not much else to say except I'm really looking forward to the sequel!
Doilan
2009-07-08 . chapter 8
hey taker-took-my-toys!

another amazing chapter!

haha good use of those annoying snakes in a crate

I can't wait for the epilogue

From the one they call Doilan.
slouchingtyger
2009-06-27 . chapter 8
This was a pretty sad ending. Hopefully they'll meet again in the epilogue. I'm looking forward to your next story too.
Punky
2009-06-13 . chapter 7
I LOVE THIS! Keep up the good work XD I'll be watching for another chapter ^^
Doilan
2009-06-02 . chapter 7
Hey Taker-took-my-Toys!

Woo! that is all...jk

brilliant chapter as usual T!

oh no only two more chapters left?! oh what will i do with the spare time now?> lol

can't wait for the next installment

From the one they call Doilan.
slouchingtyger
2009-05-25 . chapter 7
Heh. Finally a kiss, and Leon just *had* to walk in on it. It's funny that they didn't let that stop them. Poor Leon, this has to be very confusing.

I like the story of how Marcus became a merchant. It really makes sense. It's a shock to find out he has worked for Umbrella (I assume). I hope we'll find out more about that.
Willyies
2009-05-23 . chapter 7
yay! this was a nice and romantic in a sweet way chapter :) i can't wait for the next two chappies you're going to write! keep it up!
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