really liked this one great job:)

great job on everything

Loved this. Nice family interactions. Puzzled by one thing, that Kim had forgotten some things between her and Shego. Maybe it's been too long since I read all of your stuff to remember the explanation. Anyway, Good tale, glad you're back from your 'dry spell'.

Woo-Hoo for an end to dry spells!

This was an *incredibly* charming story, Humbug, and beyond fun to read. It was worth the wait. Your characters and dialog, your subtle -and not so subtle- use of humor, your level of description and detail, all where very well executed and -like I said- a blast to read. The gem of this chapter, beyond your scene with Kim and Shego waking up in the same sleeping bag (funny; but talk about cramped ;-) ), was the fairy tale -endearing, cute and charming, it was the highlight of the chapter.

I for one am looking forward to reading future offerings.

Are you going to continue in this timeline or branch out with some new ones in the KP/KiGo universe?

Very Well Done!

Woo-hoo! I loved it! Shego tells one heck of a story, even with Kim chiming in every three seconds. I really like Kim and Shego's parenting style with you. When they were talking to each other and then suddenly went to yell at the kids was great; gotta love a parent's ability to do two things at once. The way they go back and forth with each other was great too. The kids keep those two on their toes too; never a dull moment! I really enjoyed this story and look forward to the next one in this series. Good luck in your writing.

this was great. I loved it. Plus, i liked the joke, no matter how bad it was. In fact, I missed the joke altogether at first & had to reread it to get the punchline. But since i have a niece & nephews I got to hear a lot of bad kid jokes & this was perfect for them to do. I realy emjoyed all 3 chapters of teh camping story & appreciated to the time you took to entertain us freeloading fanfic readers. Good stuff!

Heh, it was kinda clever when ya put "The Blues Brothers" reference in this chapter.

Meh, overall this fic was an interesting family time, weird but still lovable, heh.

Invader Johnny Signing Off.

this story is so sweet. a really great job. one of your best

Ahh, I love a story that makes me laugh and smile at the sweetness at the same time. Well done!

Nice

Sweet, one more part would be awesome. The only thing extra I had to say about this chapter involved the snakebite info...but LoR already beat me to it. Curses.

Nice, as per your usual fluff. Now, it's onward to the next part!

Love it. Only one error:"Hm!" Kim growled down at the sleeping 'back' between her bare feet. Waiting for the conclusion.

Rofl HA! This is so funny!
And i also have to say that its adorable.
bravo!
=]
i cant wait to see u write more of this universe

Now I'd be remiss for not mentioning this, and yeah I'm a b*tch for doing it (but my instructors would skin me alive if I didn't), but the first aid stuff is all wrong/archaic. But for the story it works, which is all that matters.

Speaking of stories, this is so incredibly charming and funny. The Alien bit at the end had me in stitches. That and it's igniting my nature lust. I've been around concrete, pollution and too many millions of people too long.

Great Stuff, Humbug.