It's very clear! What I got out of it: Gin is worried that if Aizen finds out the pair's history, he'll use it against them. Gin doesn't want Rangiku to get hurt. :)

Incredible. This is truly gripping. I love all of your oneshots, but sometimes I forget to review. Your work here was a reminder in and of itself, though. Keep it up :)

I knew who this was modeled after even before I read the title, that is quite amazing, I love it!

Oh wow! I am seriously impressed/amazed/astounded.
You just write Gin so WELL! Matsumoto, too, but Gin is harder, because almost nobody knows what he's thinking! Wow!

I almost did a fave-and-run. Ouchies.

XDD I LIKE MUCH. MUCH MUCH MUCH. I like the way you display Gin. :]

Very insightful, most of these. I really wish there was a happy ending for these two. I think your last lines pretty much sum it up though. I still love this pair, despite that. Great work. I especially liked the character study one. I think that was pretty much spot on. -WV

Wonderful drabble. I loved the "In the end..." lines. They were the best part :)

Gah!

Incredible insights; you totally nailed this one.

(The 'gah' was for the final line... and the brain-bleach-worthy mental image of Yamamoto's wrinkly schnozz replaced by a penis. Thanks for that.)

I listened to that program too! I love NPR.
Your work is also very good. I like Gin/Rangiku, even though they'll probably never end up together. I think Gin is one of the most interesting characters in Bleach, and there's more to Rangiku than meets the eye.

So sad! ;_;

You write really beautifully!

I love this story, its so well written

Chapters 2-4 make my stomach twist. I'd love to read more from you.

I really do love this pairing and I honestly think you did a very good job keeping them in character. You also added jurt the right amount of angst. :) Great job! XD

Excellent poem -- both as an homage to Williams and as a take on the plot of Bleach.

poor Gin