Aw! Cuteness! x3

You should write the se

haha no offense, but i like this one better than the original ending. the other one just makes me sad D:

loved the story!

haha I just love going back to read the part where Ed hears that Kairi thinks he's cute. lol It's so awesome XD

awesome story ^^ hope u do make the sequel though

I like this ending bestest ^-^

Thank goodness... she's not dead anymore...
Good ending, overall. It's raining, but the rain can represent how all of the bad things are being washed away so they can start anew.~
Sorry. Got all deep on you there. So long~

man...that was really good...I'm litterally crying right now! my dad thinks I'm insane cause I like sad stuff like this, but I'm such a mush ball. I have never read a fanfiction where the OC dies, especally if the entire conflict wasnt resolved yet.
But you are a really good writer and I hope to read more from you in the future. (I also plan on creating an account here so I can post some of my fanfiction, not that it could possibly compare to yours! XD

After all she went through...and she just dies like that? Ironic, really...I kinda like it. But you better make that alternate ending fabulous or I'll write my own for you! xD Por Ed! Dx I really honestly didn't see that one coming! Write more soon!

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O MY GOSH SHE DIED.
O MY GOSH KAIRI DIED.

KAIRI...!

Plz post the alternate ending soon... wow... I don't mean to bug you or anything like that but I'm sort of in shock. Really REALLY in shock...

wh-whoa... Where the heck is her brother?! O man poor Kairi... I loves your story man! I can't wait for the next chapter! Hooray!

wow, I cant wait for the next chapter.
Her past is interesting.

THANKS FOR UPDATING!! dun dun dun where is he? i gotta find out UPDATE SOON

great story, Kairi is not a mary sue, a mary sue is like a character that is far fetched and un real, and Kaiti is not like that

is this the last chaoter or is there ganna be more?
It was really really good!! xD