 Tu Esposa Liz 2009-04-13 . chapter 1 Duh, too lazy to log in. ;D
Welly-who, this was a nice surprise in my inbox today that I had to wait for Sushi to leave before I could read it! This was quite a nice little story from you. Intelligently written, per usual, yet simple enough that you don't have people like me zoning out. I'll admit, you went a bit semi-colon happy at some parts, but that's easily ignored. :3
I really loved the imagery you set up in the readers mind when you explained their night together. Quite enjoyable. ;D
I like this take on their night together in the past - now only if we knew how their next hook up will be! -giddy seizure-
Loved the story darling! Keep up zee great work!
X to the O that is so damn fine, words can't describe it's sexiness,
Liz
PS: OMG, HOUSE IS ON TONIGHT! -fangirlsqueel- |