|Reviews for Success: What It Is and How to Achieve It|
| Light on the Horizon 5/16/12 . chapter 1
Haha! Great story :)
| malfoyforever 4/29/11 . chapter 1
That is just hilarious, though I didn't really understand that well. But Bellatrix smiling in a good temper is unimaginable... LOL
| HotCocoa 3/3/11 . chapter 1
One of my favorite short stories. You did a splendid job. I just wish that it could have been longer. ;)
| Swallow B 10/21/10 . chapter 1
Giggle/snort... Oh wait,this isn't funny at all. I can just see a few historical situations where this 'team building session' would not have been out of place at all. It just goes to show how one can hide horror under jargon... We'd better open our eyes and ears, they're doing it now.
| Vera Rozalsky 11/22/09 . chapter 1
Death Eater office comedy is one of my very favorite HP fan-fiction genres. Yes, these people are evil sadists but they are quite hopeless as an organization. Bellatrix in perky mode frightens me more than I can tell: if there's one thing worse than a sadist, it's a cheerful sadist.
The audience reaction was wonderful, particularly the byplay with Lucius and with Snape.
| NobodyAtAll 7/26/09 . chapter 1
"Augustus Rookwood hesitantly raised his hand. Bella smiled encouragingly. ‘Come along Augustus, don’t be shy! Touch base with us on this one!’
‘Complete domination of the, er, wizard world, and the…umm, destruction of muggle society, leading to the creation of a slave based economy for the benefit of purebloods? Or something?’"
Very funny, I cracked up several times.
| madmaddiee 6/17/09 . chapter 1
hahahahhaa. i love it!D
| ArianaRae 5/2/09 . chapter 1
Oh wow... Bella in a frock... I'll never be the same, LOL.
| Slave2Writing 4/15/09 . chapter 1
Ridiculous and hilarious. It made my day.
| GoddessofYouth 4/14/09 . chapter 1
The ending was awesome! Great one-shot!
| Lone-Wolf666 4/13/09 . chapter 1
Lol. she would make a great manager, or teacher. i can imagine her putting my class back in line with a few unforgivables. brilliantly wriiten, really funny how bella suddenly goes from being a maniac to project manager.
| Euclidian 4/13/09 . chapter 1
Take it from one who worked in county government for many years - this is very well done. I have two wishes for you:
1. I hope this is not an accurate depiction of your current work environment.
2. I hope you spelled yourself to automatically come out of this mode at a particular time - I'd hate to lose your writing skills to some sort of brain freeze.
Maybe I've read so many of your stories that I'm beginning to think like you, because before I got to the last paragraph I was thinking this would be a great way to get the Deatheaters to reform and change sides!
| xDoubleIndemnity 4/13/09 . chapter 1
LOL, this amuses me endlessly. I like how all the other DEs are talking among themselves, and Bella is being weirdly sunny. HEHE, Bella should call Snape Snivelly! Sorry, couldn't stop my Snape dislike from showing for a sec. But i did like his comment about risk management. And the ending made me LOL. Just one comment though: Either the Aurors can't count, or it's a reference to a group, but "twenty of the most wanted criminals"? - Narcissa isn't exactly a criminal or DE. Just saying. Otherwise, great. You made me laugh. ]
| wingedthing 4/13/09 . chapter 1
That is brilliant! I was laughing even at the beginning, and was amused throughout. The whole idea is ludicrous - very well written :D
Also, if you enjoy writing Harry Potter fan fiction, you might be interested in online roleplay games based on JK's books. I write at one called Sonora Academy. It's good fun and an excellent outlet for creativity. Plus our community is very friendly and I'm sure you'll find it enjoyable. If you have a chance, check out the link on my profile. We'd love to have a writer like yourself on board.
xx wingedthing xx
| xoxLewrahxox 4/13/09 . chapter 1
LOL! I really enjoyed reading this fic and it is definately being added to my favourites.
I loved the way the other death eaters were reacting to what Bellatrix was saying.
I also loved how Voldemort was with his Death Eaters.