This story is amazing! I love the way you write the characters. Please write more. Thank you for writing.

Hello? Is the author hiding from civilazation? Where's the sequel?!? I've been waiting for such a long time and I think I deserve a reward for waiting so patiently! Please write another story! Thanks!

Yes! Woho! It's finished! Dang this story rocked. You had Obi-Wan down to smallest detail. Anakin was right on the money too. Congragulations! You have thourghly impressed me. Keep writing. You've got a gift for Obi agnst that I've never seen before. I'm anxously waiting for the new story, so dish it up before I explode with excitement, 'Kay? Toodles for now!

This is brilliant :D great characterisation and plot- and mention of wombats! I love it how you linked up Anakin eventually taking on his Padawan. I saw the Clone Wars film but have yet to watch the television show properly.

Looking forward to reading more from you. Thank-you for sharing!

I really really like this, but I haven't read all of it yet. I can't wait till I can though- its really well written.

:O

She did not just do that.

This chapter was good! Probably the best one in this story. And what was the best moment? When Obi-wan got his shoulder mantle from the hands of 501st..that was very good part...probably the best one in this chapter:)

So I can wait for nine - pardon Obi-Wan - eight other stories about the Cone Wars from you? That's great! :)
And I really liked this last bit. About the armor and all (I did wonder sometimes why they had one and most of the other Jedi didn't).

Very well done. I enjoyed it immensley. When might the next one be up for our reading pleasure?

Well done! Very enjoyable read.

Loved it! Especially the rational for the armor. That was a switch I felt could be better explained. :)

Phantom Jedi

Love this story. Some hurt/comfort fics tend to get out of hand with the comfort part,but you wrote it very well. I also feel you were dead on with the relationship between Obi and Anakin. Oh, and in case you were wondering, Labyrinth of Evil by James Luceno explains what happens on Cato Nemodia in the first ten chapters or so. Chapter 5 is my favorite!! *wicked grin*

I really enjoyed this story! You had fantastic characterization, and I liked seeing the background of Obi-Wan and Yoda's plotting to stick Anakin with a padawan. I hope you write more in the future--I'll certainly read it if you do.

Hee, excellent ending here as I am admiring the way that you used Obi-Wan and Yoda as partners in crime to lead Anakin into Mastership. Some time ago, I thought that Anakin might have initiated things, sort of to jumpstart his way to Masterhood, but TCW showed him in a more reluctant light. Obi-Wan's recovery period was well done, nicely realistic with the residual effects of his ordeal included. Looking forward to December, when my turn at the crack_van reccing wheel over on LJ comes around. Happy writing!

Now this was excellent. Wonderful characterization throughout, a great plot, good dialogue, and canon. I'm more of a P/A fan myself, but I loved the A/O father/son relationship here. I think there was a solid mix of everything, and you have a firm grasp on how to write the SW universe. I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.