 Megatyrant 2009-07-28 . chapter 1Interesting. Never thought I'd see a sequel to this particular story... but I'm pleasantly surprised, no less.
So, Soun will be showing up, eh? That can only mean one thing... water trouble, and lots of it. (Not to mention Soun's patented waterworks.)
Anyway, I do look forward to more chapters of this one. :)
Megatyrant out. |
 Rune Tobor 2009-05-26 . chapter 1 A very good start, could you work it so they visit Herb sometime? Ranma and Herb can spar and discuss curses, Nabiki can talk with Herb's wife. This does mean aaid wife will need a name and background. As for what the ice queen can do for the dragon prince, perhaps the Musk would like to invest in some Japanese or Western stocks and technology? Magic is nice but the internet is cool too. I think that if Nabiki and Ranma marry then Ranma should take the Tendo name. Ranko should not use the Saotome name when Soun shows up. Tanaka Ranko is my suggestion.
Thanks for the story and please keep updating. |
 funvince 2009-05-09 . chapter 1I'm glad you wrote a sequel. It's obvious that your writing has improved since the prequel. And it's good that you're dealing with the realities of Nabiki and Ranma's situation as well as giving us some more romantic moments between them. |
 TegwenielWestwind 2009-04-24 . chapter 1Excellent beginning. It'll be odd seeing the flow of the story change after the first story, but I think it'll be a good experience. |
 neo82 2009-04-21 . chapter 1I loved the old story. Now I will be signed up for this one. Thank you for continuing on. I look forward to it. |
 Celestial Indigo 2009-04-16 . chapter 1Good story. I want more.
Lookin' forward to your next chapter. |
 mountainelements 2009-04-16 . chapter 1Thanks for starting the sequel! I hadn't really thought that you'd publish it after so long and really just checked your profile on a whim. So far, everything makes sense. I was wondering how Soun was going to react to Nabiki living with a boy. |
 Andy Wong Fey Hong 2009-04-16 . chapter 1Wow, never thought I would see a continuation of Out of sight, Out of mind. I've pretty much forgotten much of it but I know it was superbly written. Now I guess you want to wrap things up properly in a realistic way, hopefully with Ranma and Nabiki finally properly settling down and tying the know.
I don't know why you are complaining about your fic, it seems pretty fine to me, plenty of character development and planning both on Ranma and Nabiki. Kasumi was a welcome addition as well. I would like to say that your fic is one of the few credible Ranma + Nabiki fics I've had the pleasure of reading. So I'm sure this will be a great journey and will eagerly await your chapters.
Sigh, Soun coming to town, makes me worried. One thing you have to factor in is that despite their best planning, they still have to deal with the Nerima Random Chaos Factor, where Ranma is concerned, trouble follows despite the best intentions and plans. So who knows, maybe the Fiancee squad may raise their ugly heads somehow despite losing the memory. So anything can still happen when Soun comes.
Great first chapter, keep going strong. |
 kzinti7 2009-04-16 . chapter 1sweet you are writing the next part of a great story. hope you keep it up. |
 JhyarelleDrakon 2009-04-16 . chapter 1Nice. Will be keeping an eye out for this and more>
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 Cyde 2009-04-16 . chapter 1Whoa, a sequel? :) |
 Jess D 2009-04-15 . chapter 1I've read your previous story to this one, and to be honest I never thought you'd actually continue it with a sequel. However, I'm glad to see that you decided to do just that, and it has already started off quite well. In fact, I loved this chapter, and the fact that you'll work the hardships of two people starting a life together practically from scratch can bring. Again, amazing start to what I do believe will be an amazing story, so keep up the great work and update some time in the near future. Until the next chapter, later. |
 Materia-Blade 2009-04-15 . chapter 1As good as the first. Admittedly memory of what all happened in the first fic is a little bit rough around the edges but it seems a good continuation. Nabiki's character change is a good flow, and a lot of fun too.
As others have said, a few mistakes, nothing major, and the writing is ever good.
Can't way for more from ya!
Ja!
MB |
 keichan2 2009-04-15 . chapter 1I really wonder where you are going, now...
And how you will make the story interesting! I mean: Usually, a Ranma adventure contains fights, hum... fights, and... well... fights ;-p
I don't remember everything that happened in the first part, but the main idea was around Nabiki as some detective, looking for cues here and there, and it was a big change from usual Ranma fics.
I don't think that you will use the detective plot again, and I can't see as much madness as in Nerima to provoke fights, hum... fights, and... well... fights ;-p (copy and paste are your friends :-D)
I guess I'll have to wait for more chapters to see how you will do that.
Please, update soon! |
 WayDrifter 2009-04-14 . chapter 1Please hurry up with next chapter |