wow this is a great story please update soon

This story is getting really good. Hope you update soon

This is awesome. Please update soon.

I love this story and I am hoping you are going to continue it soon. I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. Keep up the great work and update soon. Have a lovely day.

Smile,
Macala A.

...I blame you for mekaing me feel liek a little kida nd wanting to throw a temper tantrum to get teh next chapter out. This is awesome.

cuteness! She's adorable not klutzy

hmm, well in chapter seven you missed a quote mark in the pleading of chapter eight... kidding, I'm not that much of a grammar police. Good story.

Hello,
Just wanted to let you know that I think this is a wonderful story. You have captured my attention fully. I was so surprised with the whole daughter thing and her dying. Keep up the great work and update soon. Have a lovely day.

Smile,
Macala A.

ah, finally had the chance to come online after stupid orientation.
once again, nice chapter, and well-written! :)
and hm, i've read this like 3 times and i haven't once thought of the adopted mother part. so SO that must mean sere's real parents were mina's too, but she was adopted to someone else o.O now this is a mystery i am looking forward for an explanation. see you next chapter! and no thanks needed, i am beta-on-demand! :)

First i want to type that this chapter leaves me wating more so therefore i wanted to know when u where going to update second I have some ? for u.


Why didnt mina ask her about the baby pic and the pic with her and mina father and whats going on with Alan and mina, and ann. did he break up with ann or is he tryin to get to lily throught mina.



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i don't like alan he's kinda sketch. and poor serena.

good chapter

cool no more cold?



cute chapter



chaptr 13 please?



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aw!
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wouldnt lita kno amara since she works w/ darien? and if s y doesnt she ask her or if not didnt lita mention amara, if so darien could always go have a talk w/ her i mean tht would blow serena's cover, but then he would know the truth. also im glad what mark did 2 max or was it max did 2 mark? anyway really good chapter plz update again soon!

I just love this story, I was thinking about it last night and I was so glad to see you updated today. I really love how you are unfolding the plot. Thanks