lol i liked this, but ya know... i need that song u mentioned at the it would make it better?

I actually agree with KokoroAttakku: "soft moans perfuming the dark air" hmm... yes... i could even smell it, XD. Awesome fanfiction and your writing is very well-written as usual.

sadly, it was only one-shot.

thank you for writing such a beautiful story.

*hugs and kisses

Sioen

Ah, I love this concept and your writing style! Your grammar isn't perfect, but I thoroughly enjoyed reading this piece! I think you balanced both the physical and emotional well - you didn't overdo it - and I just love reading depressingly romantic stories. :)

There are a couple phrases I really liked, such as "soft moans perfuming the dark air". It's just so beautiful... T_T

Mhmm, all in all, great job!

aw. this is very well written. and the ending is just perfect.

Yes Martha because so many people are gonna look up a song in another language! Lol Ya I saw in my email box, and I was like, "She better not have started a new multi-chapter story, I'll kick her ass!" lol Then i clicked on it and what am I greeted with? Depressing porn! Seriously this was sad, and sexy! lol that sounds weird...hehe