this was great. i love reading stories about this conversation.

Love it! It seems so real, like what would have really happened from Rosalie's point of view. Love it!

Hi,I'm Summer and I loved your write really well,you know.:),looking forward for more Rosalie POV fanfictions!

-Summer

That was really good

Wow, what a great job you have done, at portraying Rosalie.

I've Just started reading 'Smiling Through The Pain', and thought I would have a nosey at this too, as it seemed to accompany it.

I'm sure glad I did, its a greatly written piece, and grammatically perfect.

Well done, you're a very gifted author, and I can't wait to continue 'Smiling Through The Pain'...x

it sound jut lik her

That was amazing, I loved it :)

I just stole back breaking dawn from my mom and was reading that part, but then I really wanted to know what the conversation could've or would've been like between them. So, as I've learned, there's a fanfic for just about everything and typed it.

Your's was the first to come up, and I'm glad, because it was so good, honestly I loved it. Very well written and it didn't rush to anything, and the conversation was as it should've been, short and sweet.

Very well done! :D (y)

aw I love it! :)

I think you pulled it off.

I haven't seen anyone else write this phone call from Rosalie's point of view, and I think it was well written.

Only thing -

"I smirked at him as I considered saying, ‘Oh, I know what you’re talking about. You want to go watch chick flicks with me.’ Maybe I’d even hold him to it."

The wording was just a bit confusing for a second. Was she actually going to say, "Let's watch chick flicks." Or was she gonig to say it in a suggestive manner, all the while knowing that they'd end up seeking entertainment in a more desirable way? I was just unclear about what Rosalie had EXACTLY thought or meant.

I think you should've just gone for a simple:

"'Maybe we could watch a movie,' said Rosalie innocently with a devilish glint in her eye. Emmett grinned as he thought of all the possibilities of the evening."

Or something along those lines, but better than my pathetic on-the-spot writing skills.

I think that it was a ccreative idea and I hope you write more Twilight!

SS

love it! absolutely love it!

That was really good! I love the look into Rosalie's mind and part of the story! Another part of the story that I really want to hear from Rosalie's point of view is the airport scene from Breaking Dawn. When Bella goes to hug Rosalie. But anyways, that was really good!

That's one of my favorite scenes in all of Breaking Dawn, and I just love reading stuff like this :D This is so going on my favorites!

Jenlovestwilight

P.S. Just finished "Smiling Through the Pain" and it was spectacular! Keep writing!

this is quite well actually. well done. I read smiling through the pain too and THAT is extraordinarily wonderful. really congrats ! you are one of my few favourites of this website )

Ok .. time for me to be jealous . You're an amazing writer and if it wasn't for the constant disclaimers ((some of them made me laugh ;])) I would have thought you WERE Stephenie . No lie . I would have reviewed on the other story , but I wanted to read this one , too , so I didn't . Of course , no one's perfect , and no story is perfect either , but honsetly , ((talking about Smiling through the Pain and The Seemingly Impossible)) these two come pretty darned close .

I adore these stories and I'm planning on reading your other fanfics because , a) I love The Outsider's-which you obviously know you've written about xD and b) I love Twilight , which you've obviously written about as well .

Keep up the good work . I'm officialy subscribing to you as an author . I love your stories !

WITH LUV ,

*SYDSYD*

This was so cool. I've alawys wanted to know what might have happened during the infamous phone call. Awesome Job!