 Starr484 2009-04-17 . chapter 1Wait... what's that? I hear chapter two calling!! |
 SJC8 2009-04-15 . chapter 1Nice. I like the style, this short would definitely would be cool as part of a full length story. |
 BettyHall223 2009-04-15 . chapter 1That was good but could you continue it where Jack goes to visit Sam? |
 JTSplash 2009-04-14 . chapter 1This was pretty cute...but could definitely use a sequel |
 Unputdownable 2009-04-14 . chapter 1Sweet little story, just a little bit too short. Would work better with some more chapters. |
 Aussie Em 2009-04-14 . chapter 1Totally digging your story! Completely plausible and in character throughout the entire thing, which I love! Great job! Just one question, tbc? |
 KHM 03 2009-04-13 . chapter 1Diferent, in a good way. |
 Sol3bug 2009-04-13 . chapter 1Nice day-in-the-life story. I enjoyed it. Any chance you'll be writing more to this? Maybe Jack taking Sam up on the offer? Like to hear what Area 51 would think of Sam's mystery man... --EarthBug |