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Reviews for: One of These Afternoons
Starr484
2009-04-17 . chapter 1
Wait... what's that? I hear chapter two calling!!
SJC8
2009-04-15 . chapter 1
Nice. I like the style, this short would definitely would be cool as part of a full length story.
BettyHall223
2009-04-15 . chapter 1
That was good but could you continue it where Jack goes to visit Sam?
JTSplash
2009-04-14 . chapter 1
This was pretty cute...but could definitely use a sequel
Unputdownable
2009-04-14 . chapter 1
Sweet little story, just a little bit too short. Would work better with some more chapters.
Aussie Em
2009-04-14 . chapter 1
Totally digging your story! Completely plausible and in character throughout the entire thing, which I love! Great job! Just one question, tbc?
KHM 03
2009-04-13 . chapter 1
Diferent, in a good way.
Sol3bug
2009-04-13 . chapter 1
Nice day-in-the-life story. I enjoyed it. Any chance you'll be writing more to this? Maybe Jack taking Sam up on the offer? Like to hear what Area 51 would think of Sam's mystery man... --EarthBug
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