please i love this story

please finish it and please more kibo

bervo same this-seean-naver-happined

i can't wait for your next update. really looking forward to where you'll go with the next chapter

great chapter. i love the totally spies reference

please more kim & bonnie

Both or you keep writing, this story is awesome and a lot of the other stories you do are cool.

Alright then, FINALLY an update! Okay, yeah, so I also got delayed with this review a bit. Whatever, let’s get rolling already.

I like seeing that you guys are still making use of the setting as much as possible, showing around things that, wherever I look at them from, it’s nice and enjoyable. Not much else to say about this aspect, except that I hope there’ll be more of this as well.

Now, I like seeing how the reflections are really setting in, like the development in the relationship between Kim and Bonnie, and its… “Justifications”, if the word fits, like Bonnie liking Kim more when she is naughty and daring. It’s a bit weak, I’m afraid, or maybe presented too late, but it’s definitely handled better.

All in all, the overall work feels better. I’m afraid, though, that the damage in the plausibility made first can’t be fixed so easy, and maybe not totally at all. Take the last scene, for example, when Kim realizing she is “dead”. Part of me was like “Well, at LAST this issue is being handled!” while the other one was ranting: “And just NOW she realizes!?!”

Unfortunately, the damage is done, and there’s not much you can do about it without completely rewriting the story, but I doubt that would be a good idea. The story is still enjoyable for itself as long as one can look over these flaws. So I’m not really sure of what advice I could give about this. But nevertheless…

I hope it won’t take so much for the next chapter. I’ll be looking forward to it.

bervo -wh-d-hell-what-does-he-waith-totllysaps

BERVO WOWW-THE-FIRST-KIBO-SEXL-LOVE-MAKE-JAUST-WOW

Firstly:
I LUV the ending! :)

Secondly:
OMFG! This story is reaching Bleedman levels of epic x-over-ness. I have to stop reading and calm down everytime you bring in someone new, I luv it! Normally, bringing in this many characters would make me groan, but with writers like you and Robin at the helm, this story is going to be EPIC!

Can't wait for chapter 6!

aw poor Kim =( yay for Kibo! =)

please finish it

Two small thoughts that just won't leave me alone here ... Kimmical Warfare and Bonedance. I'm sure Kim's not planning on just taking this situation on the chin, but she's got to retrench, take care of her self-selected responsibilities, and most importantly ... FIND OUT JUST WHO SHE'S HUNTING FOR. The one chapter of the organization she had any lead on was destroyed when she was four (in fact, it's destruction was why she and B0N had to run in the first place), and the only thing she knows now is they DIDN'T cancel the whole schmeer when they lost her and Bonnie after all. I notice there has been no indications of just what Wade's up to at this point ... in my cheerful dreams, he's out cruising the ocean of information that is the 'Net and the Web like the steroid-fed Great White Shark he's proven to be, and as soon as he's isolated the source of their discontent, Extremely Bad Things will begin to happen.

More? Soon?