Wow that was great :) But didn't they just meet? I mean I know they loved each other but bloomin' heck they were fast to marry. Lol Anyway I loved it and you did an amazing job on it :) Well done - keep writing becauseyour epic! xx

i actually like the old version old one is FAB!

this is so cute!

omg i loved it!

:)

AW! How sweet! I love it!

Beautiful, as always :)

Sorry it took me so long to review. I'm incredibly behind!

Love ya.

SarahBeth.

I loved the newer version! It was cute-cute-cute, and I'm glad to see more details to it.

Also, I must let you know that I LOL'D at the mention of James Wilson. 'Cause, you know...like...that's the name of a dude on House that I adore. Yeah. Whatevs.

Write more stuff, cupcake. I mean it.

aw...tht was so sweet...:))

aw...

thats so sweet.

i love that song and Alice and Jasper are my fav characters so it made it even better.

i loved how you set it out and the whole story was great XD.

xoxo.

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That was so cute! I love Alice. And I love that text about Jacob and Leah. Priceless.

Good job. Love Ya.

SarahBeth.

Cute as hell! I loved it! I absolutely adore Alice/Jasper fics. There needs to be a book about them.

Aww...this is a really good interpretation of the song,...captures all those you could have provided an explanation why Alice and Jasper cant be together.

Azz

Cute. Pretty cheesy. But, cute. :D

I like the way you mixed twilight and romeo and juliet together.

I slipped through the house as quiet as a mouse and let myself outside. (That rhymed. ;D)...Nice.

Good job,

AnotherHPF.

aww! This was perfect! It's such a great song, and I loved this story!

Amazign job!

:)