Intriguing. Looking forward to more.

I really liked this chapter. Good job.

Aw I feel so sorry for Clive now! You captured him really well, even though this was a short fic and he was a minor character.

Good idea to focus on the lesser characters. I'll be keeping tabs on this.

I like your interpretation of Clive, true to form. Poor man, never did find out he was definitely sane. Keep it up.

gODSPEED!

Original idea. It'll be interesting to see who else you write about. Enjoyed this one, well done!