I never thought that though somehow I've crossed that thoughts, hey great story btw!

nice work !! luv it! pls write more.. muah! :D

awesome

loved it!

like you said, it really was long. i spent so much time reading it O_O but nevertheless, it was enjoyable and worth the time. im glad that you enumerated the things that sasuke did at the end. i was blind and missed out some of them. i guess sasuke still does care even just a lil bit. he just shows his love subtly. that was nice, the stuff that you pointed out has changed my opinion towards him

That was wonderful! As per usual. Lol I loved the ending especially how you made a point of the sun shining through =) Hehe I had been wanting to read this for two months but ive been busy so sorry to give such an extremely late review. Anyways im really looking forward to reading the final chapter of Something Tangible

Ja Ne,
~Crimson Breeze

i liked this story.. too bad it was just a two-shot >.<

maybe you can make it longer? :D

You know, THAT is EXACTLY why Sasuke is my favorite character in Nartuo (aside form the fact that he's pretty :P), he's so damn interesting. We don't really know his intentions at all, only what he SAYS his intentions are, and the ever intelligent Sasuke usually has somehing up his sleeve. He's a total mystery and, like Sakura says in one of your other fics, figuring out the puzzle is a part of his allure. I just hope Kishimoto goes in that direction...I have a feeling he will. He's done a fantastic job of creating one of the most complex array of characters I've come across (even if he does make all of the women medics >:l). Sasuke, despite his less than noble actions, is fantastically written. It's why I think it's so hard for writers to keep him in character, and I have to say that you did a pretty good job. :) I just wish the main fanbase of the manga (you know, 12 year old boys?) had the insight to see that, and not just comment how stupid "Sas-gay" is or how boring the chapter was becasue there was no fighting. Attempting to go on Naruto forums makes me loose brain cells.

love love love this story!! everyone's in character which is awesome =) I'm looking forward to your other stories!! ganbatte!

Wow! superb! I guess everything you said made sense :S Sasuke still cares about Sakura because he never "intentionally" tried to hurt anyone...COOL!

This was definitely a good second part. I liked how consistent you were with how this has been portrayed in the manga (physical contact, as well as Sasuke's suspicious lack of actually severely hurting his teammates). The dialogue was nicely written as well, and as I said in the previous chapter, I am very impressed with the manga-faithfulness of the characters' personalities. Overall, this was a very good story. :)

I really like the style in which this was written. You've captured the characters very well--especially Sasuke, and his is one of the hardest characters in the series to maintain. The plot is very intriguing as well, and I'm interested in seeing how the second part plays out.

This the best SasuSaku fic I have ever read in my entire time in this fandom. This is good enough for canon. I wish I could praise it properly in so many more words but I know these things have character limits.

Sakura and Sasuke were perfect. They are so much more about what is NOT said and you captured that aspect perfectly. This fic is the standard to which all SS fics of this type should be held and I have never said that before in any review of SS fics I've read.

Awesome fic! :D

love it ><