really enjoyed reading this, very interesting and unique story.
i hope to be able to read more soon

And another chapter is up :) cool.

Poor dumb Freddy... how will he be without legs? And... if his detached metallic limb is found by the citizens, it would be even worse, heh...
I'm sure Cass is planning on something.

Aww, she was so upset... bad, evil 838 :) But maybe it's good he avoids close acquaintance. I've already noticed his curiosity, it may compromise the mission.
And good song. I like songfics.

Nice line with observing a town separately. I think it would be hard (and interesting to read!). Not all humans are so naive as this officer, who even has not a metal detector...

P.S.: Freddy is wonderfully stupid ^.^ It reminded me of the moment in LotR-3 ("Return of the king"), when Gandalf tells Pippin not to speak about Boromir and then to keep his mouth shut at all :D

Well, it's funny... Cass seems to be proud of herself and finds a pleasure in killing small-minded people like Harlan or this Jenkins. Dangerous woman :D

Things are getting mysterial :) Great chapter, as all the previous ones. Be sure, you story is unique.
The description of the uninhabited area with lights, sounds and disappearings reminded me of the "S.T.A.L.K.E.R" game... there was such things too.
And, let me guess, is the abnormal zone around the Cyberdyne's electronics plant a key to the "time displacement machine" inventing?

Excellent as always.

I’ve been enjoying everything that’s happened since the start as much as I enjoyed the Salvation movie.

And I enjoyed it a lot.

Very good work as always.

Uugh... that's nightmare ;) I mean shanties. Very realistic, and according to such obvious stratification in Grays' society Skynet knows the mass psychology very well... and even let them live their regular lifestyle for better using of them. And dissociated office employees a bit reminded me of Matrix concept... I liked the description of strip-show through the machine perception, it's rather good, believable.

Good story, thanks for posting.

And two another brilliants ;)
Grey ones are very interesting matter. Why are they committing suicide, while living in their green paradise? Probably you will throw a light on this question soon, so I will just wait and read =)

I liked the scene with the playing children, unit 105 and tennis ball ^.^

Write more! Your story is quite different fron the others on .

Once again, you have a cool story.

I love it! It's so funny I've almost roll over a chair. Terminators playing cards =) And they are different, it's priceless turn... Ysa, yes, I've always known they are not just dull metal murderers, they can be individuals and even can have a wish to bluff even not being reprogrammed. These units are switched in learning mode, aren't they?

Brilliant story! Better than 98% of the stories in FFN! I really enjoyed reading this story. Good grammar, Excellent descriptions, great accuracy to the actual Post-Judgement day world. Except for the multiple made-up Hunter-killers. ( Yes, I know that the humanoids are usually called "terminators", but they still are "Hunter-Killers") You might want to give the Skynet Hunter Killers weapons that they have in the films and television series, like a "Phased Plasma Rifle with a 40-Watt range". Hehe. Yeah... I haven't got any criticism I can think of right now, even though I read each chapter twice.

What a unique and facinating story! I'm fairly sure I havnt read anything like this. Congrats on originality. Also the story it well written. Unfortunetly I dont have any helpful critism to give. Keep up the good work

New chapters are very good :)
Sorry, I have not reviewed the last two ones, but they are interesting too.
The terminator in the shape of a child is very efficient way to distract a humans (usually it's difficult to shoot at the kid)... but will not IX202C be capable of seeing the difference between humans and the newcomers? Yes, by the way, she does not eat and sleep, her living flesh is vulnerable and can begin to die soon, yes? How will she hide her unhuman features while she lives so close to humans?