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Alana84
2009-05-30 . chapter 5
Awesome fic you've got here, I really liked it!

The plot's great and so were the character portrayal as well, as the interaction between the characters! It's well written too!

This was a great prequel to; Let The Truth Sting, which I also really like/!

I noticed a mistake/typo in the final chapter, in the first sentences!

"22 year old Kate sat on the floor of her apartment, holding the hands of 1 year old Aimee-Lee as she waited for Ari to get home."

Shouldn't it be "2 year old" instead, I mean; because Kate was nigh-teen when she met Ari and one year later she gave birth to their daughter, which makes her twenty years old, back then, I mean.

Therefor Aimee should be two-years-old and not one, when Kate's twenty-two! That was probably a mindless mistake, right?!Oh, well...
icheatatpunchbuggy
2009-05-27 . chapter 5
what does bubalah mean?
I dont want to seem ignorant but it has been bugging me for a while.
animaluvr123
2009-05-06 . chapter 5
I LOVED THIS STORY!
McNinja
2009-05-05 . chapter 5
Great chapter i loved this story i am going to go read the prequal now.
Elyad
2009-05-05 . chapter 5
okay, okay, I know I am extremely slack when it comes to reviewing, but I have been reading it. I really liked it. good job. and I can't wait for the Chained to you sequel. off to go read Let the truth sting...
AussieNinjaChick
2009-05-05 . chapter 5
YAY! sequel for chained to you! loved the fic. good work.
star jelly
2009-05-04 . chapter 5
That was a great story!!
Good job!
-Pippy-
2009-05-04 . chapter 5
WIN!

lol.

That was an awesome ending/start I don't know, I'm confused.

Anyway. I loved the Replacments bit lol. Just a little bit of cheese.

I love that Ari was able to get Aimee to go to school.

Thanks for the advertisment :)
-Pippy-
Tayter.Bug7
2009-05-04 . chapter 5
Yay! I can't wait for the sequel to that one!
This story was great(:
Elfsquire90
2009-05-04 . chapter 5
good... Now I have to read the other story
gymgurl
2009-05-04 . chapter 5
that was great and yay a sequel to chained to you!
CelticHeiressFiona
2009-05-04 . chapter 5
Aw. I love little Aimee. She's so cute. Okey dokey, going over to "Let The Truth Sting" after class later!
A Fanfiction Angel
2009-05-04 . chapter 5
Great story..and uh-huh you better start on that sequel ;)
From A Fanfiction Angel
McNinja
2009-04-30 . chapter 4
Wow that chapter moved fast. I don't want this story to end is is so good
Cable Addict
2009-04-30 . chapter 4
*SQUEE!* YAY! I'm goona check out Pippy's fic as soon as this is finished! You two both rock the world of fanfiction, you know that??

Hehe!

KARI!
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