 Alana84 2009-05-30 . chapter 5Awesome fic you've got here, I really liked it!
The plot's great and so were the character portrayal as well, as the interaction between the characters! It's well written too!
This was a great prequel to; Let The Truth Sting, which I also really like/!
I noticed a mistake/typo in the final chapter, in the first sentences!
"22 year old Kate sat on the floor of her apartment, holding the hands of 1 year old Aimee-Lee as she waited for Ari to get home."
Shouldn't it be "2 year old" instead, I mean; because Kate was nigh-teen when she met Ari and one year later she gave birth to their daughter, which makes her twenty years old, back then, I mean.
Therefor Aimee should be two-years-old and not one, when Kate's twenty-two! That was probably a mindless mistake, right?!Oh, well... |
 icheatatpunchbuggy 2009-05-27 . chapter 5what does bubalah mean?
I dont want to seem ignorant but it has been bugging me for a while. |
 animaluvr123 2009-05-06 . chapter 5I LOVED THIS STORY! |
 McNinja 2009-05-05 . chapter 5Great chapter i loved this story i am going to go read the prequal now. |
 Elyad 2009-05-05 . chapter 5okay, okay, I know I am extremely slack when it comes to reviewing, but I have been reading it. I really liked it. good job. and I can't wait for the Chained to you sequel. off to go read Let the truth sting... |
 AussieNinjaChick 2009-05-05 . chapter 5YAY! sequel for chained to you! loved the fic. good work. |
 star jelly 2009-05-04 . chapter 5That was a great story!!
Good job! |
 -Pippy- 2009-05-04 . chapter 5 WIN!
lol.
That was an awesome ending/start I don't know, I'm confused.
Anyway. I loved the Replacments bit lol. Just a little bit of cheese.
I love that Ari was able to get Aimee to go to school.
Thanks for the advertisment :)
-Pippy- |
 Tayter.Bug7 2009-05-04 . chapter 5Yay! I can't wait for the sequel to that one!
This story was great(: |
 Elfsquire90 2009-05-04 . chapter 5good... Now I have to read the other story |
 gymgurl 2009-05-04 . chapter 5that was great and yay a sequel to chained to you! |
 CelticHeiressFiona 2009-05-04 . chapter 5Aw. I love little Aimee. She's so cute. Okey dokey, going over to "Let The Truth Sting" after class later! |
 A Fanfiction Angel 2009-05-04 . chapter 5Great story..and uh-huh you better start on that sequel ;)
From A Fanfiction Angel |
 McNinja 2009-04-30 . chapter 4Wow that chapter moved fast. I don't want this story to end is is so good |
 Cable Addict 2009-04-30 . chapter 4*SQUEE!* YAY! I'm goona check out Pippy's fic as soon as this is finished! You two both rock the world of fanfiction, you know that??
Hehe!
KARI! |