That was the most beautiful thing I've ever read. I'm still crying!

What Nowaki "knows" was how much Hiroki loved him, wasn't it? *bawls*

I've never cried so hard from a fanfic before! *cries even more when she thinks about it*

It was so sad, I'm crying.
Poor Nowaki, poor Hiroki and poor Misaki. I can't even imagine how much I would feel guilt if someone saved me by risking his own life. I didn't see any mistakes, from my view your English is very good. I liked the story, even when I'm not a big fan of death fics. You wrote a beautiful story, thanks for sharing it with us.

Oh how i love the egoist pairing! But Wow! That was really beautiful.

You've just made me cry...

Oh god. ;_; I seriously teared up reading this. This was so, SO well written and terribly sad. Great job.

OMG!
that was so beautiful..
i love hiroki so much i almost cried. why nowaki hes the nicest out of all of them its so awful!
-adds to favorite

I was almost in tears but i held back cause if it flows...
i'd definitely not stop...
you are way awesome! I loved the touching story...
I wish you would've explained what NOwaki "knows"
But rest of the story was really powerful,
it moved me...
Good job.
I don't know why you were worrying about your grammar, the construction of your sentences is okay. Actually it was not even close to bad.
Keep writing! I look forward to your next death fic you seemed good at writing it. It doesn't seem that you are not interested in it.

i loved this story! you're a great writer, and you got everyone's characterization perfect! it was an original way to bring the different couples together, it's always fun to see them interact. i loved your other stories, too, so please write more!

Wow, very intense, but I like it! I have never read a fic invlolving a train wreck. This is very good! I want to read MOAR Please update soon!

I Cryed. i have never cryed at fanfiction before!

This was...so beautiful...I think I'm gonna cry! T.T
I'm not into death fics of junjou either, but...this was a very nice fic, it was very well done, i really like it.

*goes to a corner and cries*