I worship u!

i already luvd that episode, now i cant get enough, u caught their emotions just right, u should be writing 4 charmed, not brad kern, plz keep writing, it's AMAZING

love it.

Wow - I just found it and LOVE it. it is so great to read what the two think. It wonderful how you used those short scenes for such hearbreaking thinking and feeling. Thanks!

I just found your stories, and have to say I loved this. I hope you can regain your muse, and write more (about Cole of course). I love the way you write!

Personally love this story the best (not counting CoH) THis story was so sweet!

HI! Good vision about look who's barking!

Me encantó, fue muy emotivo!

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Malola

that was beyond great... you whould really consider a career in writing. You explained what the writers who are being paid hudreds of thousands of dollars could not! that is amazing. Keep it up! Stay Charmed, Sara

WOW - this is so good. These are the missing pieces from this episode we all needed. This is excellent!

OMG, I'm so loving this one. It's cute. Of course it has been one of my fave episodes (and I still watch it over and over again, but writing a story about it was a great idea. Good job, hope to read more from you soon.

A little too long, needs snipping here and there, but captures the passion and fire that's the Phoebe-Cole insignia. You've delved into their minds and brought them to life. Enchanting.

I loved It!

Please write more.

I really enjoyed that story. I like the character insights you gave-well done...

THIS IS EXCELLENT! OMG - this is so beautiful - and sad and happy - all at the same time. Please write more!

Wow... That was soooo great. I luved it. And what is it about that place?(The Mausoleum) But anyway... wow.