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cwby30
2009-04-15 . chapter 1
Evenin', Donna.

Well, another side to Lureen, the unforgiving spoiled brat with money. Hope J&E cab stay off her radar for years to come. And nice touch, that J&E keep in touch with their kids, and their kids refuse to give any information to their mothers. And if Bobby ever finds out that his mother has had people searching through his place, well, I wouldn't want to be in her Gucci's... he has two strong willed parents, and I bet some of it rubbed off on him!

Also, liked how Alma wanted to see the pictures! LOL, hating it but wanting to see it. Still, can't understand how on the one hand she wants to protect her daughters, and on the other was willing to be part of a potential smear campaign that could only come back to bite her and her daughters. Still, she never was too smart, either, just bitter over the hand life dealt her.

Another great take on their story, with the best result: J&E together, making the best life they can, together. So glad you keep on writing.

Oh, and in case I didn't review "Switzerland", I liked most of that storyline. Just hard for Jack to lose his Bobby at such a young age; but wonderful that Ennis could put aside his fears to be where he needed to be for Jack. And, a priceless scene at the airport between Ennis and Alma.

Thanks again.
Jada91
2009-04-15 . chapter 1
i can't imagine jack and ennis in san francisco, so much for lureen's theory:)
-CalmingChaos-
2009-04-14 . chapter 1
Ah Donna ... I love your stories!!

And this one is awesome!!
WCUGirl
2009-04-14 . chapter 1
Very appropriate title. Your Lureen here is so much different than you typically write her. She was evil, but it was refreshing.

Thanks for sharing! :) I always love all your stories.

Jen
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