Ow, this shot's really hot *_* I'd like to read a sequel if possible. Nice work anyway! :)

An unexpectedly hot moment ^_^

Short and sexy ;) I like it but would like to know what you meant at the end about it being in color. Did you draw a picture of this scene or something? If so would like to see it.

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Also, to the person who mentioned Boa Hancock...when I first read your post I had NO clue as to who the hell that was. So I googled "One Piece & her name" and...O-M-G! I'm reading a Wiki about her here: http://onepiece./wiki/Boa_Hancock == and..and..and she's beautiful but her NAME!! My goodness! Her Name!! and I haven't even gotten to the Luffy part...to be honest I'm scared to. xDD

I'm Luffy/Nami all the way and I don't care if they stay friends forever in the series but for someone else to pop in...THAT never crossed my mind. Anyways, I'm probably over reacting here so I should just finish reading about her before I freak out. I mean this is Luffy we are talking about here, so there isn't anything to worry about... right? Sanji fine, maybe even Zoro ..but Luffy? Hell freaken no! -- Sorry let me shut up.
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Great short story! Loved it! Read some of your other works and loved those too! Now off to finish reading that wiki. *please don't be Luffy/B. Hancock*

Nice..when you say it looks better when its all colored do you mean you have a deavent art account? If so could you tell me the user name so I can see the picture? Very interesting one-shot lets hope there aren't any photographers around to catch them!

Hehehe...! Xb oh, Luffy Luffy Luffy...See the things you do! Haha, nice story. Write on!

Oh ... I didn't even see that you posted this here ... XP I think I like it colored too ... Though it was hard to read at times! XD Anyways, it was cute! XD Stupid~ Thanks for sharing, douche~ ^^

This was really good. I think Luffy is still being so Luffy in this fic and that's hard to do with him in love. However, I think Luffy is smarter then he is given credit for and I can so see him acting like this if Nami and him were to get into a relationship. I hope it is LuffyxNami and not LuffyxBoa Hancock. I mean I have nothing against her or this paring, but I like LuffyxNami much better.Please come up with a new one-shot soon.

yay XD cute little one shot. love nami x luffy! ^^

What a cute fic^o^