I like how this story made them like normal kids. Usually I don't like that, but you made it interesting :) Cool/funny story

HAHA it sounded like he was askeing for her hand in marrige.love it

This was an entertaining read. I liked how you've personified Suigetsu, he's so random and funny in his descriptions of people.

Lol, strangely enough I liked it XD even if it is in first person point of view.

that was... sudden and funny. i'm still laughing/grining. great job. you would be good at writing a chaptered one.

HAPPY BIRTHDAY MY DARLING WOMAN! GAH!

Karin and Sakura kick ass. Suigetsu fails. But I just LOVE HIM SO MUCH!

And did you know that I seriously love you? Despite the LeeTen-ness of it. I LOVE YOU. PERIOD. I LOVE YOU!

Dentists are evil. Death. Argh. RICHARD IS BEING ANNOYING. WHY IS HE BEING ANNOYING?! Suigetsu is such a creep. Why is he dumpster diving in her trash if he hates her?! ARGH. and he's also kind of oblivious. XD Dude, I'm listening to "If I Had a Million Dollars", and I'm killing myself laughing. (That's why Richard is being annoying; he's choosing the music. "And open the frigde and stuff..." and "But not a real fur coat that's cruel" and "We wouldn't have to eat craft dinner. But we WOULD eat craft dinner. We'd just eat more!")

Aw, Mikoto's SO SWEET!! DEATH GLOMP! And I like the fact that Itachi hates what-his-face-Maddy so much. AND OMIGOD, YOU'RE RIGHT! HIS HAIR DOES DEFY GRAVITY!

YAY COWABUNGA! YOU ARE MY GOD!

And I still get a dedication. I feel just so damn loved. DEATH GLOMP!

happy early birthday, then :D

exactly the way a SuiKa relationship should be, in my opinion. A healthy dose of violence and love mixed in with a little screaming XD

i like your dress descriptions, especially Sakura's. Freshly split blood...may i steal that?

Dollboy and Bombs-away, Merry pumpkin Head and Aloe Vera made me laugh. 'specially Aloe Vera and Tobi's name XD

That's a very disgusting stick shoved up Fugaku's ass there XD

Mm, video games. I love video games.

Finally another Suika! it's been a while so i am so stoked! I hope u write more and hopefully it'll be more fluffy.