 londonwriting 4/17/09 . chapter 1songandsilence... I hate you. This is not your average hatred, this is serious hate.
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What an awesome story! Of course, I love it when people are creative (there's a but coming..) and think up their own stories, but (there it is!), I can't help but love this story! Partially because, after that promo, frankly it's all that's been on my mind this week, and you've written realistic specualtion. You've kept them in character, and I think the way you wrote it, was brilliant, absolutely fantastic. And that's why I hate you - I'm supposed to be doing revision right now, damn it! But I couldn't resist reading and reviewing this story.
Kudos particularly for the way you wrote (and write) Chuck's character, and Sarah's actually, now I come to think about it! You've let them stay sweet and a little bit nervous, but not awkward (kinda how I hope the episode will play out this week).
The only thing that I might have changed (but a matter of personal opinion) is this line; 'She must be either crazy or in love, and she’s pretty sure she knows which one it is.' I might have said something like it was a mixture of both, because she is kinda crazy in love. :D
Anyway, I'm really gonna fail my exams if I try and express to you how good this was anymore, so a huge thank you for sharing this with us, and seriously, great work, I loved this! |
 Valorous 4/15/09 . chapter 1I liked it a lot! I actually would be happy if the next episode runs along these lines. But I'm afraid Casey or someone/something else would interrupt before they get intimate. Anyway, you should think about continuing this, the story is a nice start up and the characters are well protrayed. Thanks for sharing! |