   goldacharmed 2/5/12 . chapter 1Nice story. Love the song choice too! |
| Biisaiyowaq 1/16/11 . chapter 1 Wow. That's really...it looks into the deep, dark, inner thoughts of someone who will never truly fit in. Someone like Superman.
Biia |
| DaggerPen 4/8/07 . chapter 1 Nice. You capture his dilemma very well.
"He headed down to meet his parents, to rejoin the normal world and to pretend once more that he wasn't what he was."
I'm not sure why, but I really like that line. |
| technetium 1/22/02 . chapter 1 Very good job! |
| BlondieAL 12/17/01 . chapter 1 great story! You should keep writing, you have a real talent! |
| A Darker Shade of Yellow 12/16/01 . chapter 1 oh gosh, this is good, messa like, you had it so that the song acctually added to the fic, which is hard, good job! |
| SurferChick 12/16/01 . chapter 1 Great story! I love that song, and it fit so well with the story! Keep writing! SurferChick |
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