Wow, this is quite a good start! Update soon!

Pleazmoar- Pardon.
I think the ideas are neat, as I love to speculate over anticipation. The action may not be the best thing in this chapter, but I like the setting and wouldnq't mind to find more material to read. :)
If this si keeping up, I think I'd have to fav it.
Anycase, thank for writing. I'm happy to find gen Equilibrium. (Not that I don't like romance, but for some reasons I just can't stand Preson/Mary)

i think this is going to be a very interesting story! can't wait for the next chapter))

This seems to be going in an interesting direction!

Update soon?

Hm, good story so far. I like it. Your style is very good. ^^
I hope that you will add more chapters.
Can't wait to read more of it. ^^

Have a nice day.
Rei G.M.

Oh! This is incredibly interesting... Please update soon!