Oh wow, such a sad tale. Sad, but addicting. I'd be very happy if you added another chapter to this story. It's well written and has me hooked. Update soon, please!

i adored this and let me tell you, the part where James and JEssie were almost going to do it, i was silently cheering for them! but then i thought that James was incredibly brave admitting why he didn't want to! wonderful work.

Mondo and Mewoth are so tear worthy, it's so sad and i love the whole tie in with the title at the end of this chapter, 11 years in the making and worth it!

Please make an epilogue, just something sweet and something to tie everything up!

I'm glad I got to finish this. OK, I request - no, demand - a sequel! Please continue writing a story in this vein!

Hey this story was brilliant even though I felt a little sick when you mentioned about the hand but I got over it quickly when I remembered that it was the hand of a killer and I say good riddance he was a bad boss and he deceived to die after what he did to all those poor people, luckily Cassidy, Butch, Mondo, Meowth, James and Jessie got out alive and are on the way to a new life even though I dread to think about what is going to happen to Team Rocket now Giovanni is dead and I hope that Butch and Cassidy get the Hint that Monod gave them and chooses not to return to the HQ but knowing them they probable won’t and will return only to get killed like all the others and I also hope that David (Lana brother) gets the hint and got out of there when he was told to but knowing him he probable has and is far away and hiding so he will never get found like the others (hopefully).

I think you should write another chapter and that because I would love to know what happens next and I will review again for both when you have put them on.

Till Next Time

Wow. Just...wow.

I have to admit that I was skeptical starting out. The whole Giovanni drug thing made me a little skeptical due to the fact that a lot of writers have all sorts of stuff happen with Giovanni and guns/jail cells/random crap. But I kept reading because you don't have such an amazing reputation and so many reviews for nothing, you know? And I'm absolutely blown away. I am so, so glad that I continued reading and was able to enjoy the absolute genius that this story simply is.

I really can't praise it highly enough...the plot was so well done and had so many twists and turns and yet kept things IC throughout. I've always adored Mondo and was overjoyed to see him here being a hero but also being a boy who has to become a man in a very tragic way that drives him to feel so divided. I don't think I've ever been so positively pulled into a fic before...to the characters and the story and the words and EVERYTHING. There was NOTHING that didn't just make me say "This is the best thing I've read on this site."

I know you must get such (deserved) praise for this fic, but I am truly inspired by you and how well you have kept to the Pokemon world. I lack the grace and elegance to give you the words you truly deserve...but I respect you and adore your work and hope to see more of it.

I would like to know what happens when Mondo and Meowth return and how everything turns out for James and Jessie in relation with their relationships with the twerps (who were written so well that I could cry). But, if that never happens, I'm still smitten with this piece.

Congratulations on finishing what must have been a lovechild after eleven years. You have a true talent and I hope you never forget that. Thank you for thirteen of some of the most truly enjoyable James/Jessie and general Pokemon moments ever.

I have been reading this off and on and I am glad you decided to pick it back up! :)

I love how you wrote James. You made him so innocent and pure. I had to laugh at a few bits because he is just so funny. Even though he was drugged out of his mind.

Don't forget the refridgerator Jessie. Lol

I could just picture though how sick he was and how loving Jessie really is. I give this fiction an A+. good job!

I would suggest adding on a chapter or too about Jessie and James' relationship. It got a little saucy and I was really happy about that. I love J&J lemons! :3

ive commented on a previous chapter. this story is quite addicting. you HAVE TO MAKE AN EPILOUGE :) i'm kinda sad that the story is practically over. you are an outstanding ''author'' u should make a book lol

gosh i love this story! all of it not just this part of course :) its pure genious! i thought it was cute when ever james whined because he thought Jesse was leaving him. But i also felt bad for him too. That drug must be pretty darn strong 0_0. Anyway again i freaking love this story! I am totally hooked on it! stayed up all night just so i could keep reading. It would be cool if you could just keep adding onto this one forever. Its drama was amazing lol. I wish i could give you a cookie for a job well done! ^_^

I just read this whole thing in the past few hours. It was easily the best fanfiction I've ever read. I was completely absorbed in the story. You're a talented writer!

this is a great story. i really think you should write the additional chapter you mentioned in the author's note at the end of chapter 13 as well as an epilogue. this one has kept me on my toes since the beginning... nothing but raw emotion that makes the reader feel almost everything the characters are feeling whether it be sadness, anger, pain, love, etc.

in all honesty, this is probably one of the best fan-fictions I've read about Jessie and James. you made it seem so real that its like they actually exist. i mean yea, I've read plenty of good stories about the couple but this is by far one of my favorites. it shows how love should be between 2 people and that you should never give up on the ones you love.

anyway, I think I made this review long enough. hoping to see at least one more chapter or 2 of this one :)

Eleven years? Eleven years writing this? Wow. wow. Seriously, I mean, wow. Wow. But thank Arceus it was good. No, more than good, awesome. Great job. :-)

YES YES YES please continue this! I read this only a few days ago and fell in love with it. I hope you add an epilogue- the whole story was amazing, and the plot was new and exciting, but the end sort of left me a bit dissappointed.

Loved it. An epilogue would be wonderful...

Well worth the wait, but it still feels unfinished. An epilogue would be most appreciated. I'd like to see how the rest pans out, a sequel maybe? What will happen to Team Rocket? Do they just become normal citizens or will some other new, evil power take over and manipulate them? ;) Here's hoping for some answers!

This was the absolute best Rocket fic I've ever read. I don't want to demand it, but I would love an epilogue. =] Thanks for this great story.