Love the story.

that was a nice beginning. If you decide to continue this story, I will happily read it! =)

Very believable! Please continue. And don't at least something about Shippo & Kirara whom without tweaking Could easily make it to this time too. ^_^
Thanks!

ah! i wanna kno what she wished for! *crys* NYA no fair!

You should totally continue you it! Update ASAP!!

how could you, you heartless beast? You two better update this story and tell me what the wish upon the shikon was...or ELSE. lol

Great job, I really like your style, where you start with the definition of concept or word

OMG what did she wish?! You so left me hanging...and poor Hojo...she can't possibly be his girlfriend...