Another one down, but the worst is still out there. Hope the kids stay on their toes.

Boy, has Veruca gone over the horizon. Great cliff hanger.

She shoulda brought Ron with her!

Good job with Kim in mission mode. Just hope Ron wakes up to the fact that she might need help. Really looking forward to the next chapter.

Who knew Barkin had that much sentiment? Nicely done.

Ron is always the romantic, isn't he?

Hope they can stop Veruca before the dance.

You've set up an intriguing sitch for the dance now. I really like that. We don't often get to see such emotions from someone seen by most as totally shallow. Another reason to look forward to the coming chapters.

Good job of reminding the reader that there is more work to be done before the happy ending can come for all who deserve one.

Oh all the things that SP will not forget, or forgive, it would be the kiss. Nicely done celebration here.

Well done.

Not what I was expecting, it was much, much worse. Great job.

And another one comes out of the muck to take on Kim and Ron.

Oh great... here we go again!

But really, what are the odds that Veruca has the same skin type?

I'm a bit confused here... Did Camille and Veruca live in the same house, or does Dr. Leon just have another lab in Veruca's house?

Until the next...

Cutting it a bit close, but a jolly good show indeed! Hurrah!

Well Ron's responsible for both sides of the win here.

Kim had better keep an eye out for any girl who wants to try to steal her Ron away from her, and that homicidal ex-cheerleader that's on the loose too.

And I've got to wonder what Ron's reward from Kim will be...

Ron, meanwhile, had better keep an eye out for one overprotective Rocket-Scientist-Daddy of his girlfriend... I hear black holes are such the rage with them.

CB73