I thought this was really good. Reid and JJ have always been there for each other. They so belong with each other. Good job.

ok, this definately doesnt suck!
you write really well, the sentence structure and interesting words and everything is there...
it just needs to be longer =]

what i mean is: I really love the concept of it (that JJ saves him) lol
but i think if you made it longer, maybe put in more of a specific scenario of when she spoke to him on the phone (like their conversation) or when she shows up at his house- or something like that- it would flow better
so we could see more of how she saved him.

Fear not, you have the talent.
Cant wait to read your next story =]