LOVED IT! SO CUTE! just 1 question. When it says that Ed got his eyes back, he could only see in all red. So does his sight return to normal later?

Wow this and the prequel to it Embodied have to be some darkest fma fanfics I've ever red but there both truly amazing!

You sure did kick the crap out of poor little Ed, and so powerfully too. Loved it when Envy saw Ed's strength, even as diminished and wounded as he was as he tried to escape, and couldn't help but feel some admiration for him. Ha! Take THAT! So glad Ed found his way back to Al and didn't let Envy destroy that for him.

Aww..! XD Great fic! X3

Awesome story! The only problem I have is the rating and why it's M, but it's not my fix, so I can't change that. Nice job!

This…was so sad! Such a wonderful story!

I'm glad that there is a sequel to Embodied, because I loved it, but to me it seems that it is sometimes not taken into consideration that Edward is also deaf and cannot hear his own voice. I like that he talks more, but it doesn't seem like he has any speech problems like he did in Embodied. But so far, I am liking this story. :)

Very deep and moving, with a terrifying undertone: once someone posing as a loved one betrays your trust, how can you trust the real one again? Excellent, clear voice and very believable.

aww...i cried at the end. this was an amazing story. i'll have to read the prequel sometime

Okay, because this is such an amazing story, I *meant* to write some actual, meaningful review... but now that I've sat down to it, I can't. There's just no words to describe just how... mm... gah, I can't think of anything besides 'awesome,' right now, this story is. You've officially blown my mind.

Another fan-

Zenna95

I cried. A lot. I could be just PMSing, but this was touching. I'm actually late now, but I had to finish - thank you.

Aw...

Hm... Ed's convalescence from this incident would make an interesting sequel.

'Twas well-written. Good work. :)

Wait...that's it? D: Please tell me you're gonna write another one ;_;

Wow! Awesome job! My kitty is purring in my lap, so she loved it, too!