it would be kinda cool if this actually happened to someone! _

great fic!

i get it she exist in two dimensions and is awake in one while in the other she's asleep!

makes complete and utter sense!

in my story i'm working on i also have a character named Kat but it doesnt stand for katie... it stands for cat but i mneeded a human name that was like cat.

Lyra. Your boring me. .

Thanks*sarcastic*

Jeri-KT

This is going to sound mean, but remember, it is never my intention to just mercilessly slam someone.

Anyway, this is well-written, but missing a key element: A plot. When you do self-insertion, you tread dangerously. There's always the urge to show the reader around your life, and half of a chapter is the details of your room and the other half is the story. And nothing ever actually happens. You could get a great story out of this if your intent was more than putting yourself with Willis and that's it. I'd like to see you use the same characters and universe-setup, but focusing more on the plot of the story than the details of your life. Try it.

*listens to Mirai for the fifteenth time today and pops a Reeses Bite into her mouth* well this justifies me being able to add you into my story... shoot I shoulda put something like this out a while ago... well anyways... I still don't get how you worked me and Tommy into that fic... well anyways...

dare I ask where that came from? different lives? a split universe?

caffeine is a good thing. but you need to stay in one dimension at a time

... a ditto for a digimon? oh welll

heh heh heh ..."we" love it when you write LyLy

do "we" really talk like that?...no wonder people think "we're" insane...hmm...::sigh:: oh well keep writin' and ill keep readin' and when/if we get our monte carlo/or any other auto we'll pay you a visit...help curb that approaching winter(depression)and i promis not to drink on the drive there...but on the way back on the other hand...Gwah

Ha

I like it. It reminds me of a story I wrote once...but never finished. Now, maybe I will...

Stories interesting so far, sorta reminds me of some book I read before with the sleep part, something about a "curse of eternal wakefulness" or something like that. Like the story, and it's not that strange. Good story.

Awesome fanfic! I SERIOUSLY can't wait for more!