Great story, only wished there was more of it. Who's got it in for John and why? Can Teyla, John and Mitchell figure it out? What's up with J/T? Thanks for a very good read.

This was a very cool, well written AU story!

I liked this story. My only wish is that you would have made it longer with more chapters and let us know who the arsonist was. Although i have a few ideas. Nice work.

great story, very fun to read, i have to admit, they're my two fave boys in the world of stargate! i reckon they'd be the best of mates!
hope you do more of this one, i want (need) to find out who's targeting shep! please do more!

There needs to be more John/Cam friendship fics like this! I loved seeing them in the fireman setting and the banter was very enjoyable and realistic. Very well done!

This is an amazing story. It's well written, it captures the characters perfectly, the plot is believable. The friendship between Cam and John is the friendship I'm sure those two would have had had they been together more often on the show. Unfortunately it's not finished finished. There is still so much more to the story that you haven't told us. Does the arsonist get caught? Who is the arsonist? Why is the arsonist targeting John? Since Cam didn't die like the arsonist obiviously wanted, will he continue to be a target? Do John and Teyla get together? These are just some of the questions I have that aren't answered yet. And I'm sure I'm not the only one. So please continue this story. =)

Oh, see, now I want to know whodunit. You must have some idea in that vast archive of plot bunniez multiplying in your brain.

I really like the plot of this story and I hope you continue I would love to see if Teyla and John get close. Why all the nudge-nudge sexual references between Cam and John?

Fin? Fin!? It's nowhere near complete! You can't end it here!
Anyway, a really untraditional story, and I like it very much for that. If I had to grade it, here's what I'd give you:
Style-10/10
Vocabulary-10/10
Plot-20/10
Character description and development-100/10!
Overall: 10/40
I hope that was enough feedback to encourage you to continue? Please, do so!

You can't end it there. We need more. We gotta find out if they ever catch the guy. Is it Kolya? Does John finally convince Teyla to go out with him? Does Cam get a girl? (ie Carolyn) These are questions that need to be answered.

Please!?!?!?!? (begging on hands and knees)

Okay...this story is very well written. I can see it turning into a great story.

Keep up the good work.

Hopefully not fin forever fin?? Surely you mean fin of the chapter?

I WANT TO KNOW MORE! I want them to catch the arsonist, and for sheppard and teyla to get together, and just, for there to be more! Because I loved this story so much I just want to keep reading it!!

Awesome awesome fic.

As usual, original unique and I loved it!

good grief, the number of AU's you come up with is staggering! and they're all fabulous. I love the John/Cameron friendship angle, and you conveyed a wonderful sense of the depth and strength of their relationship with very few words.