I thought the ending was pretty funny. It would be something I'd picture him saying. Poor, Quackerjack, having to stay silent with a NORMAL yo-yo. The horror. I loved the hint you gave of Bushroot and Liquidator's relationship as well.

Yay! This was so cute. You got everybody totally IC. Poor Megs... Grammar's the only beef I've got here, tho.

love this, the fearsome five are great together, can't grow a backbone, good insult, they all want to throttle him, poor Megs, I love clowns, well maybe not all but QJ takes the cake, he was fun, fun in this story even if he wasn't having fun, darn Negaducks rules, serves him right, I liked he end. This story makes me smile, going on faves

Great fic! You write all of the Fearsome Five so well! The Quacky/Megs was so sweet *_* and was that a tiny hint of something between Negaduck and his doppleganger or do I just have an overactively slashy imagination? Probably both XD

Again great fic, you're a good writer ;)

Bahaha, once has to wonder how Darkwing "defeated" Negs in his dream ;) Dirty mind of mine...

Also:

“Surveys say that Quackerjack needs to learn the game of shutting up.”

This line totally cracked me up. You write a great Liquidator. I always run out of things for him to say!

A cute and funny story. They better start heading for the hills when Negs gets out of jail.

Hahaha... yeah, Negs deserved it.

Keep the good writing.