Love the summary

Toadette is such a crybaby. But at least she'll get to ride if she begs hard enough.

"It's me, Toadette!" Sounds kinda confusing. But luckily Toadette recognized Birdo's voice.

I hope you save me lotsa Betty Spaghetti!

Poor Toadette. At least she's not the only one.

Wait, she's in her closet? Is the door open? Because she's going to pass out from her own smell if its not.

This story is great. I like how its not self important, only focusing on mario himself. Its also an interesting angle you chose! % stars ineed. Right off the bat, man. Great job on this one. great indeed. I have made a fanfiction based on super mario 64...you should check it out. I just started it not long ago at al s/8730011/1/Super-Mario-64-Volume-1-Bob-omb-Battle field

Hey! I thought Turbo didn't regenerate. He did die outside his game, and he became a BAD guy rather than a bad guy (just their job).

Ha! Love it

Excellent twenty-one chapters

So how did she survive the molten lava dip from the previous chapter?

Thats Mama Luigi to you Mario!

Early to bed,Early to catch the worm! Or is it the bagel? lol

Maybe a great excellent story.

Okay, your stories manage to confuse me. And that's hard to do. Keep up the good work.

this Toadette story is absolutely hilarious XD excellent job ;)